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Mise en Scene

(Mise en Scène* ‘meez on sen’ - French theatrical term meaning “placing on stage.”) A word has weight I weigh each word lest the wrath of god unbinds the bird that holds the night inside its throat where destinies of hate emote pin my mouth into a smile and lock the words into a vial that sits within the twisted vine dereliction deep design hello! goodbye? nothing to say? in dream my words will slip away when deep in sleep the mind takes flight somnambulant parasite inside my mouth a flake of moon into my eyes cold oceans swoon heave and swell my body seize in silent! silent! frequencies hey there! hear that? ah, nor do I! pins of light my lullaby pierce the flesh into design inking shifting paradigm asleep I burn myself no love and immolate the wounded dove threshold a catastrophic guise unconsciousness I weaponize I do not mean… that is to say… duality I whip away there is no ‘I’ in enemy but why am ‘my’ at war with ‘me’? in enemy both interlace the super ego face-to-face I see me now! now I am caught! catastrophic juggernaut porous space the now and then god’s domain the mise en scène place my house upon his sea then breathe it into mystery

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Date: 2/6/2025 8:50:00 PM
Sounds like you truthfully do not want to know... wow. This is a fav- I think this is superbly written, with real feeling, flow, depth, just powerful
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/7/2025 10:53:00 AM
thank you paige
Date: 2/5/2025 2:57:00 PM
Wel, as Seinfeld would say, this appears to be about nothing. Nevertheless, it has awesome rhymes, a nice beat and some cool word pairings
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/7/2025 12:38:00 PM
That's the spirit lad!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/7/2025 10:52:00 AM
Costanza rules
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/6/2025 12:19:00 PM
No worries mate. Who doesn't love Seinfeld?
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/6/2025 11:49:00 AM
To your point about the poem and meaning, everything I write is acutely deliberate - utterance, structure, tone, cadence, and meaning - all are derived from a deeper sense of something, as opposed to ‘nothing.’ The disconnect I choose to convey does not necessary equate to incoherence, but rather, it is just how I choose to reassemble my experiences at this point in time, as disjointed as it may seem.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/5/2025 3:34:00 PM
thank you tom - all the best
Date: 2/5/2025 1:49:00 PM
Enjoyed the lines - my mind takes flight somnambulant parasite - exquisite description of mind ... breath my house into mystery- lovely ending for “placing on stage” : reminds one of “all the world’s a stage”
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/5/2025 3:34:00 PM
thank you ghairo, kindest wishes

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