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Mischief

I can feel it creep through the night, for that's its game - to keep me from sleep. Insomnia is to blame; Mischief is its other name! 9/21/2018 for the Form of Mischief Contest of Nina Parmenter I did a traditional tanka using syllable count 5/7/5/7/7 but changed the rule to include a rhyme scheme of ababb

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2018 4:48:00 PM

I can relate Andrea! Many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/5/2018 12:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Rhymed Tanka, great form.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/5/2018 12:22:00 AM

This contest has for sure created new forms and hopefully some will catch on Congratulations. Tom.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/4/2018 7:09:00 PM

I love Rhyme, and your Tanka is fine by me, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/4/2018 5:20:00 PM

Very creative, Andrea! When I have trouble sleeping due to joint pain AND take one of those PM pain meds, I don't have any sense for about two days. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/4/2018 3:58:00 PM

You did well Andrea! Mine got an N/A but this list was short and I was pleased to get some wonderful comments. Congratulations on your great creative invented form getting on the winner's list!

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2018 5:55:00 PM

It does keep the sandman away..Nicely penned Andrea..

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/24/2018 5:49:00 PM

Very innovative of you. I generally sleep well. My grandmother had insomnia yet made it to 96! Glad to see you using that fine Asian form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2018 6:06:00 PM

oh good maybe there is hope for me then! I seem to do ok on just 5 or 6 hours sleep a day.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2018 9:15:00 AM

Insomnia is one bad partner. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/23/2018 4:05:00 PM

Oh, the wicked mischief of insomnia, I have been there, great description!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/23/2018 9:19:00 AM

Brief but clever Andrea. I really enjoyed this rhyme!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/23/2018 1:29:00 AM

Excellent... a mischief has a tendency to become a virtue...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/22/2018 7:27:00 AM

You hit the mark, Andrea..describing the ailment many can relate to..best for a win with your mischief Tanka.

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/22/2018 1:37:00 AM

Yes, sometimes I feel like my mind is moving stuff around in the attic in my head, and the noise keeps me awake. Great little twist on the style, Andrea, good luck! Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/22/2018 12:43:00 AM

A super little tanka with your invention Andrea! I think adding the word Mischief was a brilliant move. You know how much I can relate to the insomnia! A great entry Andrea! : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/21/2018 11:54:00 PM

Nothing worse than sleep deprivation and as we get older it seems to hit us hard. Roll on the afternoon nap. Good luck Tom

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/23/2018 12:16:00 AM

wish I could nap but I can't seem to do that either!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/21/2018 9:09:00 PM

I can so relate to this poem, didn't sleep a wink last night! :)