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Mischief

Little Miss Mischief stalking feathered loot Misty movement through grass, a gray mirage The warbling victim tooting its last toot Her pouncing play, I must sabotage Before she bestows another birdie in my boot! 9/ 6/18 For Nina Parmenter's "Mischief" contest Original form, Quatrain : 4 lines of verse My annotation: I added a 5th line-

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Date: 9/17/2018 9:34:00 PM
That 5th line is a winner! ~ gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/18/2018 2:51:00 PM
Let's hope so :)
Date: 9/17/2018 10:56:00 AM
Very adorable read, Michelle. It made me smile ... such understated humor. A beautifully written poem. Love and hugs always.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/18/2018 2:52:00 PM
Always happy for your encouraging words, Freddie!
Date: 9/14/2018 8:46:00 AM
This one is cute, Michelle:)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2018 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Jo-
Date: 9/7/2018 10:29:00 PM
Ah nothing like a cat's love ;) enjoyed! My best to you in the contest Michelle, xomo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2018 12:13:00 PM
Yes, cats have their own way of showing affection, thanks for your comment!
Date: 9/6/2018 4:53:00 PM
Oh, I have been there, Michelle. It is darling! Good luck in the contest.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2018 12:14:00 PM
Appreciate that, thanks, Caren!
Date: 9/6/2018 4:00:00 PM
Nicely crafted Michelle...best of luck for the contest...I'm sure Nina will love it...love & light...^WW^
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment!
Date: 9/6/2018 1:14:00 PM
Hello Michele, this is a great pom fr the contest. Your poem is cute. I can just picture this scene happening i your backyard. Have a nice day my friend.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/6/2018 2:07:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you for your kind comment-

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