Mischief

Little Miss Mischief stalking feathered loot
Misty movement through grass, a gray mirage
The warbling victim tooting its last toot
Her pouncing play, I must sabotage
Before she bestows another birdie in my boot!

9/ 6/18

For Nina Parmenter's "Mischief" contest

Original form, Quatrain : 4 lines of verse
My annotation: I added a 5th line-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:34 PM
That 5th line is a winner! ~ gw
Faulkner Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Let's hope so :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Very adorable read, Michelle. It made me smile ... such understated humor. A beautifully written poem. Love and hugs always.
Faulkner Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Always happy for your encouraging words, Freddie!
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:46 AM
This one is cute, Michelle:)
Faulkner Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Jo-
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Ah nothing like a cat's love ;) enjoyed! My best to you in the contest Michelle, xomo
Faulkner Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Yes, cats have their own way of showing affection, thanks for your comment!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Oh, I have been there, Michelle. It is darling! Good luck in the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Appreciate that, thanks, Caren!
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Nicely crafted Michelle...best of luck for the contest...I'm sure Nina will love it...love & light...^WW^
Faulkner Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Thank you for your kind comment!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Hello Michele, this is a great pom fr the contest. Your poem is cute. I can just picture this scene happening i your backyard. Have a nice day my friend.
Faulkner Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you for your kind comment-
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