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Mirrorred Refrain-God Gave Us Love Freely

Smell the spring aroma and let it delight all your senses... don't the softest roses bloom on windless, sunniest days? Let my slow fingers caress your lustrous hair, feel the pleasant warmth of a lovely afternoon; on windless, sunniest days... don't the softest roses bloom? Only the truest lovers can set the white moon ablaze, as the passing stars shed more light on their faces; don't the softest roses bloom on windless, sunniest days? God gave us love freely as the air we breath; humans have turned it into lust and doom... on windless, sunniest days don't the softest roses bloom? Entered in Jared Pickett's contest,"Mirrored Refrain"

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Date: 3/31/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrew on a well deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your success with this lovely work....Margaret
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:49:00 PM
This was a great poem and deserved this HM.... Thank you, and congrats my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 3/30/2010 3:52:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Jared's contest.. for this wonderful write from a wonderful poet.. enjoy your honor ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:37:00 PM
Lovely poem. congratulations on you winJ Joyce
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Date: 3/30/2010 1:02:00 PM
This is a beauty, and well deserving this win. Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest, Andrew! ~ Love, Carrie
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