Mirroring

I have a mirror
                      that is taught
                      only shows what
                      I suppose I am ...
                     It's a mirror
                      hypnotized...
                     Mirror of mine ...
                     This mirror lives for me
                      and for me ... he is supportive.
                     Further than  an obedient dog,
                     further than my own shadow ...
                     But I am certainly sure 
                     that my real time is counted...
                     my mirror, this one
                     is already aging ...!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2020 10:02:00 AM

Love this! How faithful is our mirror and often mean too. Blessings, dear one!

Alkas Poetry
Date: 11/2/2020 1:00:00 AM

Blessed you are my gentle lady, thank you Very much for commenting me salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/29/2020 10:35:00 AM

Hello Alakas, everyone's time is counted. Whether we like or not. Salute Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/30/2020 11:48:00 AM

Hello Alakas, yes poetry is both of these things.Salute Darlene.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 10/30/2020 5:22:00 AM

But some do not know...poetry is not only reality...is reverie, consider this,,, salute dear alkas