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Mirrored Reflections

Receive Listen Be Still Whispered words arriving on teardrops of the wind They call to me Embracing me so that I may exhale For a moment in time I look down to see the child woman curled up on my lap Quietly dreaming I stroke her sleep dampened hair and Caress her cheek gently with my palm Oh, child of mine Allow me to reach in and Cradle your wounded heart Let me carry your pain and worry Stirring, she turns her face revealing A half-eyed sleepy smile A gift I have treasured for centuries Remembering the day I walked through the trees of time Lime, emerald, forest green, moss, juniper, ochre, and kiwi Yellow tinged velvet leaves ride silver breezes Tree people Miraculous sacred creatures Birthed of mother nature Beckon me onward and inward Towards water’s edge where moving mirrors of Intellect and mystery await me I walk with my companion who rides on my shoulder The white hawk of my dreams Narrating our passage through space and time Howl Howl Howl Stories above me, monkeys wearing fur Play and swing Screeching, flying, and tumbling through the air Reaching sacred river’s edge I pause and hear silent footsteps Of the others joining I gaze at the flowing water Reflections of the lost ones float by Faces of those who have passed from this life I reach out and kiss each one with my fingertips All of us gather ~ standing and joining hands Collectively we reach up towards the heavens We rise as one Taking a moment to listen and Receive grace from one another A glimpse and a grin are shared As I squeeze the weathered hand Of my fellow human Up Up Up Up We float above the majestic green canopy A glorious carpet of Lavender clouds awaits The day moon and the day sun kiss As they watch us rise A moment of gratitude shared by all POTD 9/12/2023

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/15/2024 7:30:00 PM

That moment, when all of us gather back together, will no doubt be a beautiful one... Wonderful writing, Susan!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/18/2024 2:02:00 PM

Thank you dear Kelly ! Big hugs Susan :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/6/2023 3:59:00 PM

This is brilliantly written dear Susan, love it, congrats on potd

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/27/2023 6:11:00 PM

Dear Mystic Rose , A belated thanks for your visit and lovely comments. Hugs, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2023 1:11:00 PM

thanks for reading one of my poems recently. When will you have a new one up?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/9/2023 7:21:00 PM

Ok let me know when it's up

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/6/2023 8:45:00 AM

Hi dear friend . I just wrote one so will post it soon . Big hugs, Susan :)

Timothy Ray

Date: 10/28/2023 6:30:00 PM

amazing and i will leave it at that....

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/29/2023 12:32:00 PM

Hugs dear Timothy … and more hugs . Susan :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/20/2023 2:54:00 AM

Good Morning Susan. Hello. Please allow me to let your entry and words stand because there is nothing I could add. Your entry is well thought out and executed. I very much enjoyed how you turned darkness into light which gives hope and more. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. I can see how your entry made POTD. Have a wonderful morning. Keep enjoying poetry. Blessings and Peace (smile) PS - May the lavendar clouds reveal themselves for all.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/29/2023 12:30:00 PM

Dear Lisa , A belated thank you for your lovely presence and comments. I appreciate you taking this journey with me . It adds so much to have you along for the ride ! I love your last comment - May the lavender clouds reveal themselves for all . Yes, I hope they do . We need love and light now more than ever . Big hugs to you , Susan :)

John Watt

Date: 10/14/2023 2:40:00 PM

Dearest Susan - your search for (and gratitude for) all things sacred always invites your reader to join you on a profound spiritual journey. This trek is lovingly scented with the aroma of lavender clouds, white hawks, silver breezes, seven shades of mother nature's diverse green, motherhood, sun and moon in unity, and peace among humanity. "Stories Above Me" could serve as the title of your autobiography because you always entice your readers to join you with eyes uplifted to see the narrative going on above (in sky and tree) and around (with fellow humans and creatures). You are consistently a poet of great uplift, and we your readers are blessed by the positivity and humanity your words are infused with. Well done, another Fav. Hugs ~ John

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/29/2023 5:58:00 PM

And thank you for the Fav ! Blessings dear John :)

John Watt
Date: 10/29/2023 2:29:00 PM

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Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/29/2023 12:27:00 PM

Dearest John , A belated thank you for the gift of you ! Your presence is always received with a big smile and open arms. Thank you for the depth of your comments , spirit and heart . I feel as if you see right into my soul and get me . I am In gratitude to you for your thoughtfulness and light . Hugs and blessings to you and yours . We miss your poems ! Love, Susan :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2023 3:20:00 PM

Your stanza which starts with ' Tree people, remarkable sacred creatures' and ends with ' Intellect and mystery await me' mesmerizes me, for trees and I have always had a relationship. This poem is evidence how awesomely you prepare and execute any topic you choose. Hugs and blessings dear friend, Jennifer.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/1/2023 2:08:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, Your companionship on my poetry journey is cherished . Trees are sacred beings that have always spoken to me and provided comfort , mystery and hope . Sending hugs and blessings back to you dear friend . Xx Susan :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/24/2023 12:24:00 PM

Love the leaping conscious/subconscious paragraphs Susan! Well done!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/25/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much James ! Happy for your visit and comments ! Susan :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/24/2023 12:22:00 PM

wow you suspended my activity and quieted my mind. Your an amazing poet, with exceptional talent Susan, Congrats on your POTD

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/25/2023 11:26:00 AM

Dear Mystic Rose , what a wonderful gift you and your words are ! I so appreciate you and am thrilled I could quiet your mind for a few moments. Thank you ! Hugs, Susan :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2023 2:07:00 PM

So cool. I can see why it was selected to be honoured. You are a great storyteller.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/23/2023 2:10:00 PM

I feel the same way about you Richard ! Onward ! Looking forward to your next . Thank you :)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 2:50:00 AM

Sorry I missed this uniquely beautiful potd. I go months not writing or reading and then suddenly bust at the seams with poetic engagement. Forgive me.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/23/2023 8:36:00 AM

Dear Karen, So happy for your visit and kind words. You are appreciated ! Have a wonderful weekend ! Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/20/2023 6:42:00 AM

I love the beautiful captivating imagery, Susan; it compels the reader to leave everything behind and follow you into a world which many of us have forgotten it exists. There we shed our problems, noise and fast-paced life; finding a calm haven where we can destress, listen, meditate. And we can share all this with gratitude. ~ Always a pleasure to read your offerings, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/23/2023 8:35:00 AM

Dear friend Paul, your visits are alwasy cherished as are your words and participation in the journey. Thank you for visiting and taking a few moments away from the noise and fast paced lives we have. I appreciate you. Looking forward to more of your magic soon! Hugs and all good wishes to you and yours, Susan :) xx

John Gondolf

Date: 9/17/2023 9:56:00 AM

Susan, my dear friend, you have such a beautiful way of melding humankind with nature. The artistry of your words leaves me in awe. Congrats on the well deserved honor of having your verse named POTD. Hugs and love, John

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/19/2023 1:05:00 PM

Hi dear John , so wonderful to have your visit. I am so happy we could journey once again together! What a gift . Thank you for your kind words and congratulations. Hugs and love back to you , Susan :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/14/2023 6:30:00 PM

Dearest Susan, my soul sister, time-travel companion and sweet seamstress sewing the seams of the spiritual and physical worlds as one tender realm, I am in awe of your poetic artistry integrating time, space, love, respect, Nature and humans, and the white hawk into stirring images and emotions cascading down upon the page and into my heart and soul. I am inspired by your breathtaking masterwork, my lovely friend. Congratulations for receiving POTD honors. So well-deserved! Warmest wishes, love and hugs sent on soaring white wings and may your brilliant artistry always grace the poetic pages of my mind and the collective conscience.. ~Susan

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:48:00 AM

My dearest Susan ~my elegant time-travel companion whos expresssions are golden and evoke thoughts from deep within, Your words fill my heart with happiness. I am humbled and in gratitude for your presence. I love ~sweet seamstress sewing the seams of the spiritual and physical worlds ! How amazing to envison this ! I am always in awe at your depth of consciousness . You have lived many life times and your beauty and sage wisdom shines through in your gifted words. So happy to be on this journey of life and poetry, spirit and soul with you dear friend. Sending whispers of white wings to embrace you ...may you find moments of beauty within . Love and hugs , Susan :) xx

Deb M

Date: 9/14/2023 11:31:00 AM

Another exquisite poem Susan …..you write with such pure beauty….it must be lovely in your head!! Hehe….perfect pick for POTD my sweet friend! Congrats ….Debx

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:35:00 AM

Deb, In gratitude for you. Yes to experience these moments in my head is cherished.... the next best part is sharing them with you through my words! Hugs, Susan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2023 7:09:00 PM

…oh to be so close - Faces of those who have passed from this life I reach out and kiss each one with my fingertips. Congratulations on POTD!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:32:00 AM

Kim, Yes to reach out even for a few moments to touch tham is a gift. Thank you for the congratulations ! Big hugs, Susan :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/12/2023 7:39:00 PM

Dear Susan, reaching out to the ones we can embrace, while holding onto (in memory, of course) those that have gone on before us. I find that comforting in so many ways. Your words are deep, beautiful, spiritual and uplifting, all at the same time. The images you paint leave me in complete awe. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:31:00 AM

Hi dear Brandy, Your heart is so special and your insightful comments are cherished. Yes I find comfort as well in being able to touch the images of those have passed before me and glean their knowledge and experience moments of connection that fill my heart. Thank you for the gift of you ! Looking forward to reading more of your beauty soon. Hugs, Susan :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/12/2023 7:22:00 PM

Oh my, this is such a breathtaking and truly a magical piece dear Susan. I'm in awe of the rich and lavish imagery that you've have hued with the colours of nature and painted the eloquence of a mother-child bond. So sweet and adorable.. The sentiments of love and fondness here, with care and wishes.. Ah, these all flow so beautifully in the lines that you've so beautifully articulated in the most impeccable way! Heartiest congratulations on receiving POTD, so well deserved! :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:28:00 AM

Dear Hiya, Your words flow effortlessley from your pen. I am grateful for your presence and your heart and insightful comments. I am so happy we could take this journey together through the realms of space and time . Having you as a companion is my gift. I appreciate you! Hugs, Susan :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/12/2023 6:45:00 PM

Back with congratulations on POTD, Susan. I’m so happy for you :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:25:00 AM

Akkina ! Yay !! You made me smile with your comment and return visit ! Big hugs, Susan :) x

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/12/2023 6:11:00 PM

Loved your title too so much Susan... Forgot to congratulate you on this poem receiving the potd honor dear sweet friend. Congratulations!. Big Hugs.. ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:24:00 AM

Ani, thank you dear friend. I appreciate your return visit. I am so happy you liked the title ! Hugs and happy weekend to you.xx Susan :)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/12/2023 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your honor of POTD, Susan! It is a beautiful and meaningful poem. So tender as you love your child, sweet mother's love. The dreams seem real to me, and it simulates a journey many will take as we join Jesus in the air. A glorious day that will be, all together, in His Love. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my dear friend. Bill

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:22:00 AM

Dear Bill, thank you for your insight and loveley comments. I am so glad the dreams seemed real and took you to a place of connection. Happy to journey with you once angain through the realms of space and time. Sending hugs and blessings my friend, Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/12/2023 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Susan. Magnificent poem, deep and captivating! Truly deserves the honour with exquisite images. Love ~ Mala

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:20:00 AM

Hi dear Mala, so happy for your presence as always. Looking forward to more of your wonderful poetry soon ! Hugs, Susan :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/12/2023 5:11:00 PM

Back with congratulations on winning POTD, Susan. Amply deserved recognition with this lovely poem.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/12/2023 4:03:00 PM

Susan, wonderfully creative, congratulations on POTD!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:18:00 AM

Thank you dear Tania. I appreciate your visit and congratulations! Hugs, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2023 1:04:00 PM

'free verse so very harmonious with nature. I love how everything in this poem becomes part of each other. Beautiful imagery. Glad to see a new poem from you and a POTD as well. Wow!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/16/2023 11:17:00 AM

Hi dear friend, So happy to see you dear Andrea. I know life has been busy. Thinking of you and your family and sending healing prayers. Thank you for your visit and wonderful comments. big hugs,Susan :)