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Mirror Mirror

Mirror Mirror Mirror, mirror, she asked, "who is fairest?" Said a maiden who felt like the rarest Mirror answered unkindly Maiden struck at it blindly Now her image, is cracked and embarassed. John Derek Hamilton Jan 01,2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 2:55:00 AM

John, Congratulations on your wonderful limerick win. Love Linda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/31/2016 1:32:00 PM

i had a great crack of a laugh, john.. congrats on your win!..huggs

John Hamilton
Date: 2/3/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thanks Nette always enjoy your feedback.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/31/2016 9:02:00 AM

John, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest!

John Hamilton
Date: 2/3/2016 5:16:00 AM

Thanks Hansteven for your visit and support!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/30/2016 3:39:00 PM

Good one. Congrats on your win. BG

John Hamilton
Date: 2/3/2016 5:15:00 AM

Thanks Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2016 1:57:00 PM

hmmm, maybe the meter is perfect. Just read it again and all the syllables seem to match up!

John Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2016 7:58:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2016 1:56:00 PM

I really like this one!! Meter is almost perfect and it's a funny one!

John Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2016 7:57:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/30/2016 3:28:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick John..

John Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2016 11:52:00 AM

Thanks Upma always appreciate your feedback

Skat A

Date: 1/30/2016 2:33:00 AM

John,, Congrats on your LIMERICK win. ** SKAT **

John Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2016 11:52:00 AM

Thanks SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2016 6:28:00 PM

Love the humour here John This would have placed higher but the rhyme of embarrassed with fairest and rarest wasn't perfect . Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Jan

White Sage

Date: 1/1/2016 6:41:00 PM

Nice limerick John

John Hamilton
Date: 1/4/2016 8:15:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2015 7:49:00 PM

wow, Now I REALLY LIKES IT!!!!

John Hamilton
Date: 1/4/2016 8:14:00 PM

Thanks for the advice.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 10:10:00 PM

John, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

John Hamilton
Date: 12/25/2015 11:43:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2015 4:12:00 PM

this is a good one. Jan is pretty strict with rhyme so first word you might want to make sure is same as the other two it rhymes with!

John Hamilton
Date: 12/25/2015 11:44:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, have a good day!