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Mirror Mirror

Mirror Mirror

Mirror, mirror, she asked, "who is fairest?"
Said a maiden who felt like the rarest
Mirror answered unkindly
Maiden struck at it blindly
Now her image, is cracked and embarassed.



John Derek Hamilton
Jan 01,2016

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Poet Destroyer A

February 5, 2016 at 2:55 AM

John, Congratulations on your wonderful limerick win. Love Linda

Nette Onclaud

January 31, 2016 at 1:32 PM

i had a great crack of a laugh, john.. congrats on your win!..huggs

John Hamilton

February 3, 2016 at 5:17 AM

Thanks Nette always enjoy your feedback.

Hansteven Selfa

January 31, 2016 at 9:02 AM

John, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest!

John Hamilton

February 3, 2016 at 5:16 AM

Thanks Hansteven for your visit and support!

Barbara Gorelick

January 30, 2016 at 3:39 PM

Good one. Congrats on your win. BG

John Hamilton

February 3, 2016 at 5:15 AM

Thanks Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2016 at 1:57 PM

hmmm, maybe the meter is perfect. Just read it again and all the syllables seem to match up!

John Hamilton

January 30, 2016 at 7:58 PM

Thanks Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2016 at 1:56 PM

I really like this one!! Meter is almost perfect and it's a funny one!

John Hamilton

January 30, 2016 at 7:57 PM

Thanks Andrea

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 30, 2016 at 3:28 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick John..

John Hamilton

January 30, 2016 at 11:52 AM

Thanks Upma always appreciate your feedback

Skat A

January 30, 2016 at 2:33 AM

John,, Congrats on your LIMERICK win. ** SKAT **

John Hamilton

January 30, 2016 at 11:52 AM

Thanks SKAT

Jan Allison

January 29, 2016 at 6:28 PM

Love the humour here John This would have placed higher but the rhyme of embarrassed with fairest and rarest wasn't perfect . Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

January 30, 2016 at 11:51 AM

Thanks Jan

White Sage

January 1, 2016 at 6:41 PM

Nice limerick John

John Hamilton

January 4, 2016 at 8:15 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2015 at 7:49 PM

wow, Now I REALLY LIKES IT!!!!

John Hamilton

January 4, 2016 at 8:14 PM

Thanks for the advice.

Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2015 at 10:10 PM

John, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

John Hamilton

December 25, 2015 at 11:43 PM

Thanks Linda