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Poetic Form: Villanelle
Inspired: 2024 April 23
Image: N/A

Mirror, In The Line Of Fire: POTW

''Reflection of two world faith's, they're [+ & -] for now, HAIL, the created who followed their rules, be 'change' in their faith that bear's silly nothings but rules & regs that [/'s not x's] = 'warmongers. Rumi kissed Grace = CHANGE" #3 GRACE Key Holders [-] & [+] Door Openers RUMI Mirrors seize and free; joys and fears; wherefore, lost toss and turns while hope waits for morning, gullible holds keys, knowledge opens door, Faults are the measures by those that implore, while patience corrects whose worth adds timing, mirrors seize and free; joys and fears; wherefore, The ins and outs of worth; toiling, --encore, a failed piece that favors one who's holding, gullible holds keys, knowledge opens door, Past pools plus and minus the ID's score, super balanced the pendulums swaying, mirrors seize and free; joys and fears; wherefore, Life game's unwinnable; Ace--Royal wars, snake eyes, don't pass go ..., directly singing, gullible holds keys, knowledge opens door, When they announce the winners on All Fours, be game change--their rules, your games to winning, mirrors seize and free; joys and fears; wherefore, gullible holds keys, knowledge opens door.
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Xiang Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 10:49 PM
Wow. So profound my head hurts. I'm still trying to wrap my mind around your refrain. I think if life is unwinnable I would rather be the one holding the keys. Perhaps then knowledge will show us how to game the system. Kudos.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Hi Triny, knowledge/wisdom/sagacity--all progressive entities, and none stagnate--for there's a future to attend, keyholder up in an attic--empty, brainless--goes and tell 8 billion souls in the cellar waiting--[the future] 3, "Not 1 followed." "OMgosh, what they're up to?" "Rubbing sticks to make fire." "Not backwards, time for Netflix & Xboxes!" Brainless--let's go to Andromeda. Aloha, William
Jones Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Congratulations on winning the impressive potw!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 1:22 AM
I'm gratified by your expressions, Karen. Aloha, William.
Andresen Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:33 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., William :) - An excellent poem, if it is for the contest I wish you luck :) - hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 5:17 PM
Anne-Lise, I'll initiate extended gratitude, and dive into--poem, was a shot-in-the-dark--since it j u s t met Sara's 20-line-limit/Hail, Sara's newest entry be #3 ''Reflection of two world faith's, they're [+ & -] for now, HAIL, the created who followed their rules, be 'change' in their faith that bear's silly nothings but rules & regs that [/'s not x's] = 'warmongers. Rumi kissed Grace = CHANGE"
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on POTW.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 2:19 AM
A proper post, Victor, I welcome your noticeable abilities, my friend. Aloha, William
Greenhough Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:04 PM
I enjoy this captivating poem. Congratulations on POTW..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:17 PM
I am grateful for your kind conderations, Hilda, Aloha, William
Nicole Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 6:10 PM
' Faults are the measures by those that implore, while patience corrects whose worth adds timing. ' So much truth in this statement. Every word holds wisdom, my dear friend. With that being said, you've certainly created a masterpiece. Congratulations William, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Appreciate your thoughts filled sentiments, and your deep considerations, on this special occasion that has befallen my doorstep, thanks, Brandy. Aloha, William
Anaya Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Aloha! Congratulations on your POTW William! "gullible holds keys, knowledge opens door" I say wise words to live by. I enjoyed the Villanelle very much-poet, unlock those doors! hugs~Anaya
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 8:46 PM
So grateful, Anaya, for you to share your thoughts, with me on this eye-opener, giddy-as-a-schoolboy? LOL--be I generously gendered? Ok, giddy's kickin--Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on POTW, William! Yay!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:50 PM
I'm grateful, Kim. Seemed I got my toe wet, Aloha, William.
Baker Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful Villanelle being chosen POTW, William! Enjoy your special week of recognition, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 9:56 AM
MAHALO, Texas Bill, a fine day 1 it'd be and I should be about 1 week's worth of tuckered outedness in about 5 more minutes--and to that, may yours be as Goofy as it gets around here since Donald/gardner is out East visiting family and will mow his way back to the front door. Aloha, William
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your winning write/story. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win..............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Awe, thanks again/1st was on my "Zinnia", much much appreciated, Paula. Aloha, William
Fowler Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Aloha kakahiaka dear William. A beautiful villanelle. Congratulations on the honor of POTW! hugs and aloha. :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 8:14 AM
Oh my--doubly rare & doublemint gummy--POTW & Haw'n Good Morning, thank you, Linda--Btw, they don't say that to me here in Hilo, Hawaii. They say, "Hi--oh it's just you." [English Translation] Greatly appreciated, my friend. Aloha kakahiaka wonderful Linda, your friend, William, in Hilo, HI, USA
Kitchin Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 5:57 AM
William, congratulations on POTW.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 7:09 AM
I appreciate you, Tania, Aloha, William
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 5:13 AM
Dear William, Your Villanelle is such a wonderful exploration of the dualities within ourselves. I loved the way you intertwine the themes of reflection and vulnerability which is captivating and thought-provoking. Your poetic words about mirrors not only reflect our joys and fears but also hold the power to free us from self-doubt. Your recognition as the Poet of the Week is a testament to your talent and insight. Embrace the journey ahead, knowing that each step taken with patience and knowledge opens new doors of possibility. Congratulations on this well-deserved honor, and may your poetic journey continue to inspire and illuminate. - Blessings, Daniel
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 7:24 AM
You are a "Top-Form" astute soul sending words embraced within encouragement's boosting arms, Daniel. A special heartfelt graceful thanks, my friend. Aloha, from Crazy ;)D Hilo, HI, USA
Pandit Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTW, William. Enjoy the glory of this special week, my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Wow, thanks alot, Vijay. Aloha, crazy William in, Hilo, HI, USA
Poet Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Highly significant, my friend, William, your opinions are well presented and provide valuable information. Your message has a pervasive impact. The futile rotation and tossing in the darkness, the innocent grasping of keys, and the astute act of unlocking doorsThe user's text is empty.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 6:12 PM
I'll bet my top, middle, and bottom dollar, that you, Lasaad, will always be the first through--and I'll be certain of that, my friend--just look behind you, Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 5:44 AM
So meaningful, my friend---splendidly delivered in wisdom words, William. Your message resonates throughout.---lost toss and turns while hope waits for morning, gullible holds keys, knowledge opens door---A FAVE!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:00 PM
It's been a while since I've done a Villanelle, thanks, Vijay, I appreciate your fave alot, my friend. Aloha, William
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