Mirror

When I look into you, sometimes I'm not sure just who I see
sometimes there seems to be a stranger staring back at me
a stranger wearing eyes much more sunken and black
a man who stands slumped from all the weight on his back

He seems frightened and scattered with grooves in his forehead
with a malnourished look of little food and no bed 
the life in his eyes, slowly lost long ago
from too many heartbreaks in too many rows

Although he looks worn from being beat down
his face always wears a smile, you won't see this man frown
because he's learned his life lessons and wears each on his face
and although constantly reminded he wears each scar with grace

This man I've judged so long, thinking nothing of his will
so I pushed him to the brink with the weed, the drink, the pill
brought him to his knees but he stands in front of me still
separating dreams and memories from what is here and real

So now I do not judge this man, this stranger reflected in the glass
because I know he does the best he can to keep us both up off our ass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 21, 2014 at 11:59 PM
Eric,, I feel the need to read this poem again. I like the mood, it identifies within every line..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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May 22, 2014 at 7:14 PM
SKAT, you're awesome! this was one of my favorites (which in my experience make it not as popular) lol so I am really glad you could identify with it and enjoy it :) also I think everyone at one point in time looks at themselves and says, "who is that?? I'm not that worn down" :)
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May 21, 2014 at 11:52 AM
very creative write love it
Schojan Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so much Nathan, I'm glad you enjoy my writes, I will be sure to stop by your page a.s.a.p. :)
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