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Mirror Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick 04/24/2024

"As you live deep in the heart, the mirror gets clearer and cleaner".- quote by Rumi Majestic and a clean heart when it was born. Immense sponge absorbing the best and the worst of life, Risking purity to abandon its principles. Reconsider about cleaning where your heart reflects. Offer yourself the best image for the others to look at. Reset mistakes diving deep inside, where you only can go.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/3/2024 9:28:00 AM

I liked the direction that you went with this winner. Thank you for participating in my contest. Congratulations. Way to go. We all make mistakes in life, and some are seemingly worse mistakes than others but wrong is wrong no matter what it is. Sara K

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/3/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara. I really appreciate it. Have a blessed day!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/28/2024 6:25:00 AM

Lovely acrostic piece Maria, really enjoyed this superb pen with great imagery too. Blessings, Gordon

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/28/2024 6:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Gordon. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed Sunday!

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 4/26/2024 9:16:00 PM

Wonderful poetry, Aysha

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/27/2024 1:02:00 AM

Many thanks for stopping and leaving your kind comment Aysha. Blessings!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/26/2024 4:08:00 PM

Offer your best image that is poetry at its best dear Maria, wonderful expressions here, :)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/26/2024 4:10:00 PM

Thanks Mystic Rose, for your lovely comment. Hugs/ María

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/26/2024 3:45:00 PM

Maria, your acrostic is so elegantly written, with a beautiful message and picture, also. Good luck in the contest. :)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/26/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Evelyn. I appreciate your comment. Hugs/María

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/25/2024 10:42:00 PM

Majestic describes your poem. Loved your acrostic.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/26/2024 1:03:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear Victor. Have a great weekend. Blessings!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/25/2024 8:10:00 AM

Dear Maria, your Rumi quote struck a chord. We start pure, but life throws everything at us. The question is, do we let it muddy the reflection in our hearts? I loved how your poem asks us to clean the house within, face the mess, and choose what truly matters. It's a brave journey that lets us shine brightly for ourselves and others. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/25/2024 12:18:00 PM

Dear Daniel. Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate them. Have a great afternoon. Blessings!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2024 5:41:00 PM

I appreciate your Acrostic, Maria; it's well-crafted, full of delightful ideas, and a new way of expressing the reflection in the mirror.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/25/2024 12:57:00 AM

Hello Sotto. Many thanks for your nice comment which I appreciate very much. Have a great day!

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/24/2024 4:00:00 PM

wonderful, i don't like mirrors excepting for shaving myself, your acrostich has great truth and subtlety, waw, thanks poet

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/24/2024 4:03:00 PM

My dear Yann, you r wonderful. Thank you so muchxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/24/2024 3:28:00 PM

using an Acrostic for the 'mirror' contest was a fabulous choice...it allowed for succinct expression and creativity. Plus, it carries your signature subtly and beauty. Nicely done. Best wishes with the contest, hugs Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/24/2024 3:41:00 PM

How nice to say those words. I just can believe in friends like you. Have a blessed dayxx