Mirage

Turquoise stones and sun-bleached bones Were strewn across the sand. Through mid-day heat on blistered feet The cowboy tried to stand. They stole his horse without remorse And then they took his boots. They left him dry to bake and die Without the six gun that he shoots. He caught a glimmer of a shimmer Of water in the distance. He tried all day to make his way But pain became resistance. Without shade he began to fade And the water was no nearer. The fate he faced without a taste Of water was much clearer. Then a Navajo maid saw him splayed On a rock outcrop ahead. Filled with worry she began to hurry For fear that he was dead. The water she gave helped to save The cowboy’s life that day. From the start he gave his heart And wished that she would stay. Then morning came and wagon train Appeared within his sight. But the Navajo maid could not be repaid For she had vanished in the night. Should he stay or be on his way He had to come to a decision. Was she there to give him care Or was she just a vision?

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Date: 12/4/2011 10:02:00 PM
Tony it's lovely really lovely a story well told indeed. X Lizzie
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Date: 12/2/2011 4:04:00 PM
had that ring of truth to it ... perhaps you will remember some more ... great poem Tony...
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Date: 12/2/2011 3:11:00 PM
I just love this, Tony. A sure fire winner if for a contest. Thanks very much - I loved your contest : )
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:53:00 AM
Now this is MY idea of a story poem (speaking about the blog discussion this morning). It looks like the beginning of a great story. Is there a part two?
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:59:00 AM
Sounds like there should be.
Date: 12/2/2011 9:42:00 AM
Hi Tony, you tell these amazing stories with such perfection. I love reading your poems because they are always so complete with faultless rhyme to boot. You are very talented with the pen!
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Tony Lane
Date: 12/2/2011 12:00:00 PM
You are too kind.
Date: 12/2/2011 9:08:00 AM
An excellent story you have told with this write. Being in the heart of cattle country I enjoy cowboy stories. love phyl
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Date: 12/2/2011 5:34:00 AM
She sleeps, I read, this IS a good morning, so far. I can't recall a single thing you've written, Tony, that I didn't enjoy. Big heart in that chest. It can be heard in every verse you share. Have a good day. Today is my Girl's tests. Will let you know. Thanks for the prayers, chum. Cyndi
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