Mirage

In darkness, each ache 
adds to an outline 
of your inhabited shape.
Whatever is left over
that is not body 
claws from the inside 
trying to get out.

In the end
you settle for hole 
in the mind, perhaps 
finding a quiet hollow 
in the walls of an evening,
a place overlooking a river
where its waters widen
into a blissful sleep.

Though, 
this is never enough,
a mere substitute 
as when words fly off 
in search of meaning
and briefly catch the sun
on the turn
of their outstretched wings
only to collapse
into a watery mirage 
strung across the horizons 
of yourself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:53 AM
I think I’ll just stop and rest in the middle of this one, waiting in a quiet hollow hoping to catch a glimpse of the river. Thoughtful writing, Paul.
Willason Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 2:05 AM
A good place in the middle, the first and last are rather daunting bookends. Thankyou Lin...good to receive your comments as always.
Lawless Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:47 AM
so, can I just quietly float away oaths "watery mirage"....or is this a metaphorical physics lesson regarding the make up of the human body
Willason Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 2:01 AM
Hi John, more to do with the limitations of language I think...indeed appreciate yr comments...thanks for reading the poem.
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