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Mirage

The deserts ocean, afar and dry, disappeared with the sunkin' sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/26/2023 5:27:00 PM
Love the imagery in this one Charlie. Thanks for sharing my friend...
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Date: 1/25/2023 12:19:00 PM
Interesting line you have penned in this one. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest. Sara
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Date: 1/25/2023 11:53:00 AM
Hello Charles, yes that would happen. Many mirages are seen and the disappears at sun set. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 1/25/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thank God it's a mirage. What would we do without the sea?
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