Miraculous Earth - El

born to miraculous earth to fulfill a journey worth azure sky welcomed me, so did the bottomless sea hills, meandering river, world is boundless wonder born to miraculous earth July 7, 2021 For "Elemental" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Oh yes, "born to miraculous earth." Have a blessed day with your win...............

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 6:32:00 AM

Very nicely done, Malabika. Congratulations on your winning poem. Charlie

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:45:00 AM

Miraculous Earth is very beautiful writing. I like the very down-to-earthly manner in which this is written. This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj. Your comment is inspiring.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/11/2021 12:03:00 PM

Malabika, So glad to share this journey in your poem's 'Miraculous Earth'. -Richard

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2021 5:33:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. Glad to share a poetic journey.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/7/2021 11:06:00 AM

So lovely Mala. This world of beauty truly is a gift we are born into - an inhertitance before we receive an inheritance! Best wishes for the contest dear friend!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2021 5:32:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. Glad to share.