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Miracle

You fell into my heart I tried to do my part love and food I gave. You gained your strength to start walking away. I let you roam and dart my heart to save. an attempt at a tail rhyme??

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2011 3:12:00 AM

great,, Doris,..p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/3/2011 5:59:00 PM

Don't know what a tail rhyme is but I like the way you put this together. Very nice.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/3/2011 12:38:00 PM

Snacks at the right time, keeps one fine. but Linda takes her tea at this time, Doris

Judy Ball

Date: 8/3/2011 11:30:00 AM

Very nice Doris. Sounds like a kitty you took in and when it felt better it was ready to move on. Perhaps trying to find it's way home. Good job. God Bless, JB

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/3/2011 9:40:00 AM

Pretty good, I'd say, Doris! Hope it fares well in the contest. xoxo Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 9:39:00 AM

nice write and use of Tail Rhyme Doris.. u should enter into the contest.. like the way it flows ..we are all great ..getting ready to go on vacation in two weeks... for two weeks..with grand babies..oh..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/2/2011 9:44:00 PM

Thanks for your entry, Doris

John Smith

Date: 8/2/2011 9:34:00 PM

Well structured poem. You write well.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2011 8:00:00 PM

Yes, it is a tail rhyme..Enjoyed reading this eve..Mom