Miracle

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ in silence alone I feel my heart and marvel at the miracle

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/17/2024 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful- the heart is so delicate, to listen requires the softness of 'silence' - :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:22:00 PM

thanks for those gentle comments. I agree. Silence enables us to hear the heart's beat and its softness. Well said...enjoy your evening, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/17/2024 5:37:00 AM

Pithy nice monoku indeed! God bless you ~ AA

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:13:00 AM

thanks, Abdullah. Have a blessed day, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/16/2024 8:22:00 PM

Nicely written.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:13:00 AM

thank you Hilda!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/16/2024 6:11:00 PM

It is what keeps us alive, our heart. God knew how to create it to perfection, nicely written Sara, may your heart keep on beating, healthy and strong always, :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/16/2024 6:25:00 PM

thank you, sweet Rose, for your delightful comments. I appreciate your insight and kindness. Have a blessed evening, Sara