Mirabel

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Within the Crescent City, an exotic beauty dwells. Amid spires and temple domes, finds the Priestess, Mirabel. Her hair the color of Raven wings, almond eyes a sultry brown. She bears the kiss of Destiny, upon her face and brow. Upon the day of her birth, a beauty mark, small and pink, At the corner of her eye, as a flower bud, drawn in ink. Mirabel had a vision, at the tender age of fifteen. After which an open flower, now, beside her eye was seen. When Pah-Ja-Rem, the ruler of Crescent City, heard of Mirabel, he knew that her visions, would serve him, very well. Placed within the Palace strong, when Mirabel came of age. Dressed in silks and draped in jewels, a bird in a gilded cage. As her visions came to pass, the flowers bloomed upon her cheek. They trail upon here shoulders, on her hips down to her feet. No longer does the gilding chafe, Mirabel knows the power visions wield. For now Mirabel, pulls the strings, a puppet rulers fate is sealed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by Paula Swanson For the contest: Tell Her Story Placement: 1st

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/3/2011 6:09:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations on taking 1st place -Nicole
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:59:00 AM
awesome story, Paula, congratulations on your number 1, such vision. Harry
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Constance picked a good one to finish first in her contest.
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story"Paula. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2011 6:32:00 AM
Wow, this is marvelously worded, Paula. Your descriptive imagery of Mirabel and the way she was imprisoned is captivating. Big congratulations on your well-deserved, first-place win! I was truly mesmerized by the story behind your poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, Paula
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Date: 3/10/2011 11:14:00 PM
A very exotic story you told, paula. I love the symbolism of her tattoo and how you made it alot to do with that. Crescent City also a cool idea! Very fantastical. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:27:00 PM
great poetic transformation for mirabel, paula.. CONGRATS for being on top of the heap! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:45:00 PM
Wonderfully inspired story Paula. Congratulations on your stunning win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:51:00 PM
A magical story of Mirabel....and her secret powers! Well done, Paula...Congratulations on your 1st place win!!
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:30:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your first place win in Tell Her Story contest my friend.. so happy to see u at the top for this dynamic poem ..enjoy my friend with luv..
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations Paula, on a first place win in my conest, Tell Her Story, I just loved this poem, so well presented and you tell a story that had me enchanted, thank you so much for supporting my contest, the prize for this contest is a Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, I have your address, unless something has changed,, love Constance
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Date: 3/10/2011 11:37:00 AM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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