Premiere Contest WinnerMinus Identity Who Am I


The existential bird in the supreme sky 
flies abandoned with the rhythm of swan song.
The tapestry of time wraps with eternity hue
the innate immortality essence, 
etched for the uniqueness of being. 

The winsome whisper of the extant wind
rustles the lively lotus petals of perpetuity. 
In solemn space of sanguine solitude of mind
deranged clamor subsides 
in the eroded silent sanctum of entity.

Beneath the worn out layers of individuality,
thousand suns shine perennially in blissful bay.
In the seraphic sky of divine perception,
ageless consciousness dances 
with the rays of nirvana.

I am then the immutable hymn of sanctified soul,
echoing through the melodic strata of consciousness.
The devout mantra intoned in the temple of heart, 
resonates with the symphony 
of the sacred spirit indomitable.

I am the essence of connected oneness,
transcend the self-seeking perimeter of identity.
The cosmic creator of resounding silence of eternity
makes my awakened soul proclaim the divine decree,
I am His absolute definition.
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Mitra Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Congratulations dear Subimal on your Top win :) A beautiful poem indeed :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you so much., Carol, for your read and for your nice comment.
mysore Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:49 PM
Impressive thoughts. Congratulations dear poet.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:11 PM
Thank you very much.
Woods Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 12:03 PM
So much to understand and gather from your words... it'll be like a harvest feast once I do! Congratulations! Xo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:10 PM
Thank you so much. I value your comments.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 9:57 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your Great win. I enjoyed reading your very Wonderful write. Great Job... Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Paula.
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