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I'M Not Done Yet

Life observes my wrinkles and gray hair, yet still beckons, revealing a sign; it’s message-- not “Road Closed,” but “Proceed with Caution Purpose and Joy.” October 21, 2017, entered in Brian Strand's Contest 350

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Sonia Walker

Date: 10/22/2017 3:07:00 PM

Janice, a poem which fits many of us baby boomers. Thank you for sharing what many of us feel at a certain age. Congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/22/2017 7:58:00 PM

I love hearing that my poem resonates with a fellow poet. Thank you, Sonia! Janice

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2017 1:51:00 PM

Great message , delivered in fine verses my friend. Arent we lucky to have lived long enough to get our gray hair and hopeful live log enough to get many more! Great closing verse!!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/22/2017 2:42:00 PM

Yes, we are indeed fortunate, Robert. Thanks so much for your comment! Janice