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Minichu On Fun

I, once, in my sleep, dreamed, I'd dropped from the midst of the glossy galaxy, Like a star... While waking up Found, from my bed, fallen so far, Finely... Bones fit Skin with no scar, Laughed... I, once, in my sleep, dreamed, Found, from my bed, fallen so far, Laughed... 11 March 2022 Let's Minichu on fun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 2/27/2024 12:21:00 PM
that is fun I never did a minichu can you teach me how ?
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Date: 3/27/2022 3:29:00 AM
You’re very good at this Christuraj: Looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 3/13/2022 10:00:00 AM
I've often wondered what does that falling feeling at the edge of sleep mean. I have not attempted this form; can't find a good description of it. Well done. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 3/12/2022 5:29:00 AM
I have falling dreams too so i enjoyed rhis fine poem in new form. Minichu, eh, seems hard. Thumbs up
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Date: 3/11/2022 5:10:00 AM
That's what dreams are for! Well done!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/11/2022 5:13:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/11/2022 4:33:00 AM
That was one hell of a dream Christuraj.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/11/2022 5:13:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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