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MINICHU - MAGIC

Lustrous eyes bewitch me As if a spell of gratifying love is cast I can't flee I have no hold And control over my actions Untold To take Counter steps to Break Lustrous eyes bewitch me And control over my actions Break

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/1/2024 9:14:00 AM

Lustrous eyes can be dangerous Farookh. ;) A great magical entry. Congratulations! :)

MB Farookh
Date: 3/1/2024 9:43:00 AM

Hahaha... I had already experienced the hold they had. Lol Thank you, Linda, for the warning. Many blessings to you.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/1/2024 1:22:00 AM

Farookh, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan

MB Farookh
Date: 3/1/2024 1:36:00 AM

Thank you, Mohan, for the placement. Much obliged. God bless.