Mini-Golf

Played a round of mini golf today Hot and sunny, too hot to play Too much sun got me Curtailed my glee Poor old duffer, please send a bouquet

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Russell Sivey

Date: 9/22/2017 12:18:00 PM

Ok, you want some roses or lilies? I guess some carnations would be best for a good friend! I surely loved reading this illustrious poem this afternoon! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/22/2017 1:29:00 PM

Too hot a day methinks... your favourite weather!!! LOL

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/22/2017 8:41:00 AM

You might be up a crick//from excessive limerick//After golfing//need some Rolfing//To limber up your schtick. (!) PLAY ON JACKSONG!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/22/2017 9:53:00 AM

Hey, I is an old geezer!!! PLEASE BE GENTLE!!! lol