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When I was young and handy,
                                           
my dad would give me a piece of candy.
                             
He would then ask me
                                                       
how do you make it last so long before I ran off to pee.
        
My answer would sound like a chime,
                                  
one small bite at a time.
 
Date Written: 5/25/2021
Bite Size Poem 2 Poetry Contest
                                         
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Date: 5/27/2021 4:02:00 PM
This wins first prize in the 'Pee Wee' competition -- or should I say 'Wee Pee' competition?! lol. Good one, Paula! :) gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/28/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks, for your note and for the laugh. I needed that. Glad you like my candy bites. Have a blessed day/week......................
Date: 5/26/2021 11:23:00 AM
I love candies, one bite at a time enjoying them even at 50. Nice write. Take care, God bless!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2021 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, for your note. Glad you love my candy bites. Candy is good at any age just not tooooo much. Have a blessed day......................
Date: 5/26/2021 9:55:00 AM
Too cute Paula. Made me smile. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thanks, for your note. Glad this made you smile. I love to make people smile. Candy one bite at a time will make you smile. Have a blessed day......................
Date: 5/26/2021 7:19:00 AM
hehe... cute... ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/26/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thanks, for your note. Glad you like this fun and sweet write about candy. One bite at a time. Have a blessed day.......................

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