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Mine Shadow

. Mine shadow casting "what a catch son"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/10/2013 7:48:00 PM
Thanx !
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Date: 3/2/2011 10:06:00 AM
This says so much about your love for Noah James.. A real gem, thanks for the smiles you always provide, love Wilma
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Date: 3/2/2011 9:32:00 AM
Interesting work honoring your son..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your comments on my work were so uplifting..Sara
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:03:00 AM
This is such an adorable and sweet poem, James :) In such few words you convey so much :) and a wonderful display of love for your Noah too ;) Really like how you describe him as your shadow-- You have a great day with him, and thank you for making me smile a lot with your inspiring comments :) heehee me I need to sleep but I'm still here O.0 uh-oh!!
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:35:00 PM
Cute one. you son your little shadow!!
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Date: 2/27/2011 10:30:00 AM
Soup mail for you, sweet James.
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:31:00 AM
Forgive me if I don't read this right. I am so old, you know. Love, Old Dave
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James Peranteau
Date: 8/4/2023 3:54:00 PM
I pray in Jesus Christ's name, that Jehovah God Almighty allows you; to see this reply my dear poetic friend...it's fishing Daver ;)
Date: 2/27/2011 9:28:00 AM
This is either fishing or baseball? Whichever, I like the image. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:55:00 AM
So short and yet so profound, dear James. Children often walk in their parents' footsteps. Noah is little now, but one day he will be casting his own shadow and you will be catching it. Remarkable! I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Did write a couple short poems for contests but can't keep up with all of them now. Your poem here goes t my faves. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:04:00 PM
marvelous amd well-scribed in just very few lines, james. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:30:00 PM
Elegant words James.. have missed reading your poetry my friend.. engaging lines.. enjoyed with luv..
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