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Mindtraveller - 2, Neo Tokio

Megalopolis wants growing whenever, Even she was full of wealth and honor, Swallowing lots of loser and goner, But she's still growing and stops it never. Megalopolis wants flowing forever, She washed away people into ruined darkness, She washed away people from blessed happiness, But she's still flowing and stops it never. Yes, people were tired to live in noisy light, Love was too gloomy, heavy and sticky, All bonds worked as only restriction to self. See, people hoped to live in silent night, Truth was too weak, faith was too picky, Loneliness was the only way to guard self. 20/Jan/2016 Fengleishanren.

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Date: 9/27/2020 5:26:00 AM
Nicely composed. I admire. Blessings
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Makoto Ogino
Date: 9/27/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for your visiting and kind message as usual. I appreciate it very much.
Date: 2/23/2016 9:12:00 PM
Makoto, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Makoto Ogino
Date: 3/1/2016 10:00:00 PM
Hi LINDA, thank you for your visiting and kind message. Currently I'm captured by my job, but I'll get free time soon.
Date: 1/31/2016 12:30:00 AM
Awesome tale! Going to look up "Mindtraveller - 1 and try to get it:), jill I really struggle with sonnets!
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Makoto Ogino
Date: 1/31/2016 9:57:00 PM
Dear Jill, thank you for your reading. And appreciate your message. I gave me much encouragement to continue.

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