Mind's Eye

My private universe
resides far beyond the cosmos
and into galaxies yet unfound.
Man’s mortal eye
cannot appreciate
the vastness of beyond.

My private universe
encompasses all, yet nothing.
It is much too profound to contain.
No human sought
to walk moist, spongy shores,
none to drink its knowledge.

My private universe
oozes with untold adventure
and pictures of never-before-seen
frames from my mind.
Caricature creatures
silently syphon words,

Unfitting to exist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Love this pondering. We all have a universe in our heads.
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Kim. A creative and never dying universe ;) Linda
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Wow, awesome. Thank you for giving this glimpse into your private universe, so creative! Love this!
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Many thanks for the kind words Betty Jo. A fun write for me. Linda
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