Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pleiades

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- Mindful - Pleiades M -

Mice arrived in my house
Maybe you are afraid 
   My aunty eat grilled mice
   Must say that sounds nasty
   Mickey Mouse dinner ... no
Mild hands will protect you
More courageous than most











20.04.2017
Sun : - A-L Andresen :)
( Pleiades form : M )
www.howmanysyllables.com
For Kim Merryman's contest

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Mark Martin May 1, 2017 at 7:41 AM Different and entertaining. Congratulations on your win Sunshine smile! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2017 at 7:56 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman April 28, 2017 at 8:34 PM I enjoyed this cute Pleiades, Anne-Lise! It made me smile. Can't say that eating grilled mice appeals to me, but I do think mice are cute - especially cartoon mice. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, KIm Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2017 at 7:58 AM - Nice to participate in your contest, Kim - Thank you for my 2nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 25, 2017 at 12:01 AM Congratulations on your win with this clever piece Anne-lise! 7 ; ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2017 at 4:16 AM - Thank you for your visit a 7 and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh April 24, 2017 at 3:26 AM Fun filled words! Congrats! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2017 at 11:38 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2017 at 8:34 PM Cute and that is an interesting word you chose there. Congrats on your win. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2017 at 11:37 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet April 23, 2017 at 5:33 PM I like the poem as a good read, but it needs a little seasoning... what goes with grilled mice? Some wine would be nice. A fun piece of poetry, Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2017 at 4:07 AM - This "aunt" does not drink wine ... she drinks home-made beer :)))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray April 23, 2017 at 2:10 PM I love this fun side to you Anna-Lise. Congratulations to you too. Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 2:30 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel April 23, 2017 at 9:26 AM You are very caring, Sunshine, great poem and congratulations:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 2:30 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May April 23, 2017 at 8:27 AM Congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe April 23, 2017 at 7:31 AM Grilled mice??? Ewww. Fun poem, Anne-Lise, congrats on your win. Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels April 23, 2017 at 4:00 AM Just swinging by again to congratulate you on your win! Regards, John. Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 2:28 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels April 22, 2017 at 3:22 AM A funny - but slightly disturbing - piece, Lisa :). Thematically reminds me of Roald Dahl!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John. Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2017 at 8:49 AM - Roald Dahl is one of my favorite writers, John :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams April 21, 2017 at 11:18 PM A fun llittle verse, but not my favorite topic i have to say, me and mice, but surely my scream will scare him away? One would hope? Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise Hugs and a 7 Maria Williams April 24, 2017 at 5:30 AM Nooo!! these ones that I saw in the street didn't wear pretty clothes like these. Lol Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2017 at 8:53 AM - Look at the picture, Maria ... that's sweet mouse .... :) - Thank you for your visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 21, 2017 at 2:36 PM this is a fun, invigorating work, anne.. still jetlagging.. happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2017 at 2:50 PM - Relax in the weekend, Nette - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anil Deo April 21, 2017 at 1:10 PM Loved the picture ... grilled mice might have to wait for Nuclear Winter (heaven forbid). How is aunty's health right now! Some - healthy - eating choices need long-term acquisition, LOL! enjoyed Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2017 at 2:40 PM :))))) I think she died many years ago of a "mouse virus", Anil :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie April 21, 2017 at 12:07 PM wow that was unexpected....but so much realness was reflected....simple things bring the greatest joy....and this selection is one i definitely enjoy.....;) Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2017 at 2:44 PM - Nice to see you, Eric :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf April 21, 2017 at 3:00 AM MMM, Most Marvellous! Methinks mice melt in the mouth! Haha! Wonderful job, Anne-Lise! GL Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2017 at 2:46 PM - I'll take spaghetti and meatballs ... do not like the taste of mice :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker April 20, 2017 at 7:31 PM A mouse in the room..where is the broom..good luck in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2017 at 2:47 PM - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith April 20, 2017 at 3:03 PM Yummy! Sounds like aunty M was a pretty good cook??? Best wishes in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2017 at 2:49 PM - She was a lousy cook .... could not cook tea water :))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 20, 2017 at 1:51 PM I hope Walt Disney will not hear about the grilled one! Delightful Pleiades dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck with the contest my friend! A seven to go with! Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 2:52 PM - But "Mickey Mouse Dinner" might be a good idea :) - Thank you for your visits a 7 and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman April 20, 2017 at 11:35 AM Hello Anne-Lise!! Good Luck in the contest with this particular form. An interesting metaphor for sure -- but I'll pass on the Grilled Mice!! A very funny write indeed!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 11:52 AM - I believe my "aunt" died of a small mouse virus ... many years ago :))) - Nice to see you my friend Gary :) - thank you for your visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green April 20, 2017 at 11:00 AM Ummm..grilled mice...I'll pass but I'm glad I didn't pass on your wonderfully cute poem my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 11:48 AM - .... and I am happy to be visited by you, Chris :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie April 20, 2017 at 8:22 AM Someone is in a playful mood...Anne-Lise:) One mouse is cute from afar ...the rest...excellent creativity:) A very sweet, fun picture! Wonderful writing:) lynnxxx sending you smiles. Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 11:43 AM - I do not like having mice in my house ... but I think mice are cute :) - Would not eat them :))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May April 20, 2017 at 8:13 AM Nice pleiades Anne..love the third line... Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 11:38 AM - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poetprentice Dupins April 20, 2017 at 7:57 AM I absolutely hate mice. I f there's one there's 4 more somewhere else. I had to deal with that twice when my neighbors started to renovate their homes. Your poem though, I do like. Good luck in the contest! Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 8:06 AM - One mouse ... can quickly become many - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, PoetPrentice Dupins :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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