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Mind Trap

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as we exhale dark fears ail us heart wails for love 03-September-2022

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Bill Baker
Date: 9/4/2022 5:10:00 PM
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Excellent write for this difficult form, Unseeking Seeker. I liked it. Bill
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/4/2022 10:06:00 PM
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Thank you, Bill.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2022 2:55:00 PM
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You did a good job on this one. These are not so easy to write but you make it seem easy. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my blog. Sara
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/4/2022 10:06:00 PM
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Yes, I too find this form difficult. The ‘trick’ that works for me is to visualise the second line first and then build the other two around it.

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