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Mind the Paint

There's a place in the cabinet for all of my colors 
Cans that are battered, have cluttered the shelves
Samples are chipped and are dripping with childhood
splashed to the edges, with castles and dreams

A small can of white holds a picture of weddings
with long satin dresses, and pearls like the dew 
A small can of pink, another of blue,
sketches sweet babies, in lullaby hues

There are pots filled of brown like the land of ancestors
with black rims of sorrow that darkens the soul
There's gold in containers, like the stars of the evening
that will shine into windows, when the darkness is gone
They are sprinkled with silver, 'till they light the horizon,…
becomes brighter than ever…..and the new day has come

There is yellow like sunshine, that bursts into flowers
that bloom in abundance, like the first day of spring
There's a can without labels, with the color of rainbows
It remembers the sun on a cold winter's day

Color brings life to a world that was gray,
    ......where the magic is one little brush stroke away


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3/20/18  Contest: "Mind The Wet Paint"
Sponsor Viv Wigley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/9/2018 9:57:00 PM
Superb write, Carrie. Lovely. Congrats on your placement. Beautifully done.
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:48:00 AM
A poem needs, but one word to start. But the magic of brush strokes. You broke my heart, with your quill. Failing sight, and some loss of dexterity I no longer paint. But writing poetry, words now my media, with my muse as my palette, I write. Thank you for sharing... Mick
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:25:00 PM
Love the imagery you created in this whimsical creative paint write Carrie; very colorful! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:29:00 PM
Carrie: There seems to be an "urgency" to get on with your "crafts". :o) It made me want to put on my old paint shirt and stop by. Thanks for sharing that delightful piece with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:25:00 PM
You had my artist heart dancing and singing with this one. Wow! I am blown up by the happiness and enthusiasm in this poem, Carrie.
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Date: 3/24/2018 10:35:00 AM
wonderful, CArrie. I bet this placed really high. You will always be one of my favorite poets of Soup! Congrats to you.
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:59:00 PM
absolutely beautiful imagery carrie - your pen sure has a magic touch:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:43:00 AM
That last stanza I really loved, your imagination is so vivid, and I can see it through your poetry... Hope you are well my friend..
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:42:00 AM
My kind of cabinet, Carrie, I could dabble all day :) congrats! Viv x
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