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Mind Games …”bottom of the ninth ………”two outs!! …………………two on …..three balls ……………two strikes” “CRACK” ….”.a sinking line drive to left…. ……….he moves cat-like across the grass …………………the game ……………………………….the series….on the line ….chest aching ……….legs burning …………………he dives…… …..reaching …………..grasping ………………………..floating ……in the ultimate dream.. ………hands caress the ball…. ………..tumbling ………………….streaking grass staining his face ………rolling to a stop …………………the crowd roaring” …….he squints …………………….flexes his glove …………………………………………...hears the crack of the bat John G. Lawless 11/20/2015 submitted to – Oil Paintings 4&5 sponsor – Eve Roper

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Date: 12/18/2015 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations John
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:27:00 PM
Nice write, John. Someone else must have been a ballplayer other than me. lol
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:09:00 PM
JOHN :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:32:00 AM
Nice play-by-play, John congrats.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/16/2015 3:51:00 PM
Thanks Lin, "sports as a metaphor for life", I always loved that idea.
Date: 12/15/2015 11:22:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for creating a wonderful poem for the little slugger and submitting a poem in my contest.
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Date: 12/16/2015 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I have been and have coached many dreamy outfielders...
Date: 11/20/2015 10:31:00 PM
It's in the curve John...masterful work as usual...Peter.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/16/2015 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Peter....I always had trouble with the curve...couldn't hit it, couldn't throw it.

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