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Some lackadaisical days, I sit peacefully still in a trancelike state, embarking on a spectacular, unreal adventure to an imaginary somewhere far removed from the present. My mind free as a bird as I navigate through the hazy and shadowy corridors of the terra incognita, arriving at a dreamlike no man's land; an untouched, ethereal place of wonder fit for a king! Could this be heaven? I'm meditating, but it feels like I'm in a surreal dream! Submitted for... Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 05/29/2021

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Date: 6/4/2021 2:33:00 PM
what a lovely dreamy write. thanks very much for the kind message on my birthday blog - so sorry I've only just seen it
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/5/2021 3:29:00 AM
You're welcome, Jack:-) And thanks so much for the visit and comment!
Date: 6/3/2021 12:55:00 PM
Edward - congratulations on your win - you paint a wonderful word picture of "a dreamlike no man's land" Enjoy your evening - David
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Date: 6/3/2021 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and congrats, David:-)
Date: 6/3/2021 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. I wish I was walking along your water side. Have a blessed day..................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2021 7:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-) Have a blessed day as well, my friend!
Date: 6/2/2021 10:36:00 PM
Edward, great feel in your poem. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Date: 6/3/2021 2:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, xoxo
Date: 6/2/2021 2:34:00 PM
Edward, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge and I like the image quote too, peace - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 2:39:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement and congratulations, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 6/1/2021 8:10:00 PM
Sounds like a great trip. You really took off! Sailing and Soaring, Gershon
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/2/2021 3:45:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon:-)
Date: 5/29/2021 2:29:00 PM
Succinctly done, Edward--peaceful words of meditation--dreamlike enlightenment. Great solemn images you created.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2021 3:51:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and wonderful comments, Vijay:-)
Date: 5/29/2021 7:27:00 AM
Well done Edward. The words fit perfectly :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2021 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi:-) Have a blessed weekend!

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