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Mind-Travelin'

Some lackadaisical days,
I sit peacefully still 
in a trancelike state,
embarking on a spectacular, 
unreal adventure
to an imaginary somewhere
far removed from 
the present. My mind free as a bird
as I navigate through the hazy
and shadowy corridors 
of the terra incognita, arriving 
at a dreamlike no man's land;
an untouched, ethereal place 
of wonder fit for a king!
Could this be heaven?
I'm meditating,
but it feels like I'm in 
a surreal dream!


Submitted for...
Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 05/29/2021

Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2021

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Jack Horne Date: 6/4/2021 2:33:00 PM what a lovely dreamy write. thanks very much for the kind message on my birthday blog - so sorry I've only just seen it Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/5/2021 3:29:00 AM You're welcome, Jack:-) And thanks so much for the visit and comment!

David Holmes Date: 6/3/2021 12:55:00 PM Edward - congratulations on your win - you paint a wonderful word picture of "a dreamlike no man's land" Enjoy your evening - David Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/3/2021 7:09:00 PM Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and congrats, David:-)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/3/2021 9:08:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. I wish I was walking along your water side. Have a blessed day.................. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/3/2021 7:08:00 PM Thank you very much, Paula:-) Have a blessed day as well, my friend!

Eve Roper Date: 6/2/2021 10:36:00 PM Edward, great feel in your poem. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3 Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/3/2021 2:38:00 AM Thank you very much, Eve:-) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, xoxo

Constance La France Date: 6/2/2021 2:34:00 PM Edward, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge and I like the image quote too, peace - Constance Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/2/2021 2:39:00 PM Thank you very much for my placement and congratulations, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/1/2021 8:10:00 PM Sounds like a great trip. You really took off! Sailing and Soaring, Gershon Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/2/2021 3:45:00 AM Thank you, Gershon:-)

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/29/2021 2:29:00 PM Succinctly done, Edward--peaceful words of meditation--dreamlike enlightenment. Great solemn images you created. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 5/29/2021 3:51:00 PM Thank you very much for the visit and wonderful comments, Vijay:-)

Heidi Sands Date: 5/29/2021 7:27:00 AM Well done Edward. The words fit perfectly :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 5/29/2021 8:25:00 AM Thank you so much, Heidi:-) Have a blessed weekend!