Minced Words

How can I do without mincing words
I have to deal with you
To delay dimple in dews
To deposit my desires in your milieu
To bring out your spectrum of hues
And then only
I can present you before the connoisseurs
Who wait for elegance and euphony
Who make intense scrutiny
Of assonance and metaphors
How come then I will avoid mincing
This plain straight jacket clichéd word
Worn out by everyday use through aeon
Hence the glistening knife of restless neurons
Hence the laser to hone the shape and size
Hence the file to smoothen the rough edges
This is the art of all the sages in millions of pages
You pick anyone from Shakespeare to Sylvia
Mincing of words all took as the principia
Instead of just black and white
Isn’t it better to have the bougainvillea
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June 24, 2016
For Minced Words – Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John lawless

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Date: 9/27/2016 9:55:00 PM
You are amazing I thing, love your work.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/28/2016 12:48:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/7/2016 9:28:00 AM
Hi Probir - Well then my poetry maestro - so many styles to chose from in your writings and your clever way with words - you are a "Scholar" Sir - a pleasure I shall have getting to read them all . . . : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/7/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/29/2016 3:32:00 AM
Congrats Probir, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/29/2016 7:10:00 AM
Top? Anyway, Thank you so much ...
Date: 6/28/2016 8:53:00 AM
Wonderful take on the theme, Probir. Congrats on your placement in the contest.~karam~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/28/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thank you ~karam~ ...
Date: 6/27/2016 9:44:00 AM
A 7 for this winning poem, Probir! Your mention of worn-out expressions made me think of my efforts NOT to use them. Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/27/2016 8:57:00 AM
"this plain straight jacket cliched word". You had me visualizing the diamond cutter figuring the multiple facets of each angle of each cut. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/27/2016 8:39:00 AM
Probir, great mincing of words congratulations on your win!!!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Eve ...
Date: 6/26/2016 6:38:00 AM
"the glistening knife of restless neurons" is my favorite part.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/26/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thank you ... your comment inspires me to raise another poem right now, but am otherwise engaged, ... will do it as soon as I get time ... the bird of neurons are pecking at my time ...
Date: 6/25/2016 5:14:00 AM
Good luck! Great choice of words!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Sunita ...
Date: 6/24/2016 9:29:00 AM
Probir, great way to do the theme of minced words a 7 good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve ...
Date: 6/24/2016 6:21:00 AM
great imagery and humour Probir good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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