Minced Words

How can I do without mincing words
I have to deal with you
To delay dimple in dews
To deposit my desires in your milieu
To bring out your spectrum of hues
And then only
I can present you before the connoisseurs
Who wait for elegance and euphony
Who make intense scrutiny
Of assonance and metaphors
How come then I will avoid mincing
This plain straight jacket clichéd word
Worn out by everyday use through aeon
Hence the glistening knife of restless neurons
Hence the laser to hone the shape and size
Hence the file to smoothen the rough edges
This is the art of all the sages in millions of pages
You pick anyone from Shakespeare to Sylvia
Mincing of words all took as the principia
Instead of just black and white
Isn’t it better to have the bougainvillea
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June 24, 2016
For Minced Words – Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John lawless
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Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 9:55 PM
You are amazing I thing, love your work.
Gupta Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Thank you ...
Shaw Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Hi Probir - Well then my poetry maestro - so many styles to chose from in your writings and your clever way with words - you are a "Scholar" Sir - a pleasure I shall have getting to read them all . . . : )
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Thank you ...
Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 3:32 AM
Congrats Probir, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Gupta Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Top? Anyway, Thank you so much ...
Misra Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Wonderful take on the theme, Probir. Congrats on your placement in the contest.~karam~
Gupta Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 7:32 PM
Thank you ~karam~ ...
Canerdy Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:44 AM
A 7 for this winning poem, Probir! Your mention of worn-out expressions made me think of my efforts NOT to use them. Janice
Gupta Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thank you ...
Lawless Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:57 AM
"this plain straight jacket cliched word". You had me visualizing the diamond cutter figuring the multiple facets of each angle of each cut. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Gupta Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thank you ...
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Probir, great mincing of words congratulations on your win!!!!
Gupta Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Eve ...
Roth Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 6:38 AM
"the glistening knife of restless neurons" is my favorite part.
Gupta Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Thank you ... your comment inspires me to raise another poem right now, but am otherwise engaged, ... will do it as soon as I get time ... the bird of neurons are pecking at my time ...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Good luck! Great choice of words!
Gupta Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Sunita ...
Roper Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Probir, great way to do the theme of minced words a 7 good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much Eve ...
Allison Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:21 AM
great imagery and humour Probir good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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