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Millions of Miles

millions of miles on earth I roam with years behind me, the dust is gone from Nepal, Dublin, the Caymans to Rome millions of miles on earth I roam no candles burning, no place to call home a loving heart, now empty I groan millions of miles on earth I roam with years behind me, the dust is gone millions of miles, I reap what I've sown with life behind me, time has withdrawn my past an echo, a whispering dome millions of miles, I reap what I've sown my path in weeds, the land I comb long past my prime, lost youth and brawn millions of miles, I reap what I've sown with life behind me, time has withdrawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/3/2012 2:37:00 AM
an old soul perhaps returned again, like johnson did sometimes and when, my turn to cross the void, just no way to avoid, on earth the zen... thank you Rhonda "millions of miles" Don
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:35:00 AM
quite a stunning beauty Rhonda.. free flowing and the Triolet form is superb for this entry.. much success luv..
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:07:00 AM
Terrific, Rhonda. I assume this is for the Miles contest - if so, it will do well. If not, you should consider entering it. We do reap what we sow - and you have sown beauty in this poem. Joe
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:50:00 PM
Wonderful flow - full of expression and feeling, well done and congratulations : ) And thank you for your kind comments, Bren
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:52:00 PM
Okay, now that is MINT! Just so much to like here- as sad as it is, it is FANTASICALLY crafted, hon. Loved whispering dome, especially. If this is for the miles contest, it is sure to top high. My girl is asleep, early tonight. I posted some po's and meant to read more. But I'm zonked, weird buggie thing almost gone. Only 48 hours? Strange. Anyhoo, good night and I so enjoyed this stellar write of yours. :-) Cyndi
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Date: 3/1/2012 2:00:00 PM
graceful flow of impressions, rhonda.. i feel you here!.. win it and huggs! :)
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem Rhonda .Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:47:00 AM
Very good - many can relate to.....George
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