Millie Loves Billy

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Limerick inspired by L. Milton’s Limerick “Catching His Eye” Catching His Eye A smartly dressed lassie from Philly Was quite adept at being frilly She was ever so prim When hanging around him Something was special about Billy. Written by: L. Milton ****************** Millie loves Billy Young Millie fancies a guy named Billy When near him she behaves rather silly She shows off her jewels Forgetting mother’s rules Doing a belly-dance and a shimmy. Written by: Belle Bellevue *********************** 15th May 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/18/2021 9:35:00 PM

Momma's gonna give her a billy alright -- a billy club! lol. Good one, Belle. Smiles, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2021 4:18:00 PM

Lol! Belle, You and L. Milton penned some cute and funny limericks and they complimented each other very well. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/16/2021 4:20:00 PM

Hi, thank you Alexis, have a great day yourself… Belle

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/15/2021 5:12:00 PM

Dear Belle, this limerick is so cute - Love it! Milton's is very cute too! Such a sweet couple - Millie and Billy! Love and hugs~ Mala

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/15/2021 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Mala, glad you enjoyed reading both of the Limericks. Love and hugs to you too… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2021 3:52:00 PM

so so cute, Belle. billy is a dang lucky guy.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/15/2021 3:54:00 PM

Ha, he certainly is, thank you Andrea… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/15/2021 2:49:00 AM

Hi Belle, your limerick is so cute, I love it. reminds me off a joke I was told years ago, a little girl always did cartwheels at parties and her mother said, that is not nice, because you show your panties. to cut a long story short, she went to another party and mom asked her if she did or didn't do cartwheels, I did said the little girl, but don't worry mummy, I took them off, so the didn't show! Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/15/2021 9:48:00 AM

Jennifer that’s hilarious, thank you. Hugs and blessings sent straight back to you… Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2021 1:39:00 AM

Lol, think we all remember those awkward moments Belle. Hope you have a lovely weekend, just back from a week in the new forest, easing restrictions may not happen as this new strain is causing concern, India should have been on the red list a month ago, Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/15/2021 2:17:00 AM

We do… That was nice to have been to the new forest, can’t see much happening over the weekend but will enjoy it anyway as I hope you do too. Bad news about the new strain of the virus, fingers crossed… Belle