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millet

the millet's stem bends beneath the weight of cardinal... seeds disappear fast stem now touches ground bending from cardinal's weight.. cat in the shadows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/25/2015 3:26:00 PM
Great two Haiku Sara, I like visualising the view..'
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
Very Good Haiku! I tried only one and I think that will be it for awhile LOL! You did well here Sara! MC
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Date: 9/20/2013 12:22:00 AM
the second one is a GREAT haiku, with that twist at the end!! the waiting cat!
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Date: 9/18/2013 6:37:00 PM
I love the world around you, Sara.....always captured with beauty!
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Date: 9/18/2013 1:35:00 PM
what a prettypicture , tjis one, sara.. ben away for a short while only to be stunned by this greeat 'ku!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/17/2013 8:57:00 AM
Hello Sara, i hope that cat doesn't creep that close... fly bird fly.. <--- I'm trying to be a little cute.. well done... always...Linda
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