Mill Wheel

The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until the Spring
Vacant, her eyes, with the lack of remembering,
Cold infusion from air and stare in the late afternoon,
fire embers die as the ghosts fill the room.

Her lips moan like the rocking chair sway,
I watched her world deteriorate day after day.
Mother, mother, how did we end up here,
wooden walls creaking, dementia growing near.

Whispers ran through the town from door to door
the night I knew I couldn't take anymore.
Only a child, I felt the starving pain in my side,
When she asked where was Papa it was then I lied,
"He's coming home soon Mother, this I swear,
she gave a joyous smile as she rocked in her chair."
In a fit of anger I left her rocking there....

Ice melts, revealing secrets- wheel creaks
Through dirty windows the spring sun peaks
A state of denial upon the frozen face lies the story
of the undercover living life of our purgatory
Dads in a grave, Mother in hell, me... I'm doing well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/30/2018 8:41:00 AM
I see you went 'outside the box' with how you used the theme, Casarah! Excellent! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:52:00 AM
I really enjoyed your write, Casarah. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 7/25/2018 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A sad, creative story for the lines. Well done. Thought-provoking.
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:28:00 AM
Congrats on a very poignant piece, a completely different take on the theme from everyone else and all the better for it, casarah. Thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
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Date: 6/28/2018 7:06:00 PM
WoW! Casarah, This is such a sad and well written piece. It is a good poem for the contest theme. Dementia is such a sad and depressing disease, I know it would be "pure hell" to watch your loved one fade into a state of not knowing who they are. Excellent job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/29/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, I wanted a different take on the theme. hugs x
Date: 6/25/2018 7:47:00 AM
As only you can, Cas.. you made sad, sadder than sad. Excellent!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/26/2018 2:26:00 PM
glad I can bring stories to life through words
Date: 6/24/2018 4:45:00 PM
aww cas this is so so so sad, I found the dementia aspect so sad and the final stanza hits home hard as I had a mail from a friend whose parents are both suffering and one doesn't know where the other is - both in a living hell:-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/26/2018 2:25:00 PM
aww that is sad. :(
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