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Milkshake

Smooth and creamy Oh, so dreamy sugar sweet what a wonderful treat chocolate, vanilla, strawberry so moist what an endless choice small, medium or large with a spoon or a straw Add nuts or candy or even a little brandy syrup, whip cream I feel like a queen No crown on top but a cherry hits the spot slurping all the way down my smile is now a frown. 3/28/2015 T Reams Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud 'Poems that did not place' Sorry I can't remember what contest I had this in. It's been awhile.

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Date: 4/9/2015 1:21:00 AM
I enjoyed your "Milkshake" poem. Julia, :)
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Date: 4/9/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Julia
Date: 3/30/2015 8:07:00 AM
Tammy, this is a delightful poem, I love milkshakes also, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my fat sweet . . .
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wing for the nice comment!

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