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Milkshake

Smooth and creamy
Oh, so dreamy
sugar sweet what a wonderful treat

chocolate, vanilla, strawberry so moist
what an endless choice
small, medium or large with a spoon or a straw

Add nuts or candy
or even a little brandy
syrup, whip cream I feel like a queen

No crown on top
but a cherry hits the spot
slurping all the way down my smile is now a frown.

3/28/2015  T Reams  Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud  'Poems that did not place'
Sorry I can't remember what contest I had this in. It's been awhile.

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Date: 4/9/2015 1:21:00 AM
I enjoyed your "Milkshake" poem. Julia, :)
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Date: 4/9/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Julia
Date: 3/30/2015 8:07:00 AM
Tammy, this is a delightful poem, I love milkshakes also, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my fat sweet . . .
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wing for the nice comment!

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