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Mighty Presence

There is a striking vision Mountains entered my heartstrings And painted the horizons Blue azure near me Mighty in their presence here Secure in their own powers Keeping me entranced with awe Cold snow banked mountains Russell Sivey

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/21/2014 11:48:00 PM

A great work Russell,snow on mountain,no doubt , could be amazing.I enjoyed it. Happy weekend.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/21/2014 6:51:00 PM

Your creative words are breathtaking in this wonderful Dodoitsu Russell. Thank you for sharing. Warm Smiles, Connie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/21/2014 2:41:00 PM

an excellent write with excellent descriptive detail, yet leaving just enough for me to complete the depiction and make whole, russell..towering work like a mountain!.. huggs

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 1:55:00 PM

I love mountains they are so majestic Russell beautifully portrayed in this exquisite write hugs

Tim B

Date: 2/21/2014 10:47:00 AM

The majesty of mountains. My friend, you make me miss my home. Though, I tell you, they can feel a bit overwhelming. They are so alluring from a distance, speaking of God's grace and power. Thanks for sharing.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/21/2014 9:49:00 AM

Wow!!!! Beautifully painted with words. Yes...you've captured the grandeur of mountains well....

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/21/2014 8:14:00 AM

Dear Russell, the view you penned is breath taking! I am transported and in awe! 7 my best, chuck

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/20/2014 11:49:00 PM

Very descriptive duo of dodoitsu entries.