Russell Sivey Poet Dodoitsu

Mighty Presence

There is a striking vision
Mountains entered my heartstrings
And painted the horizons
Blue azure near me

Mighty in their presence here
Secure in their own powers
Keeping me entranced with awe
Cold snow banked mountains

Russell Sivey

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Kayod5 Kayode February 21, 2014 at 11:48 PM A great work Russell,snow on mountain,no doubt , could be amazing.I enjoyed it. Happy weekend.

Connie Gildersleeve February 21, 2014 at 6:51 PM Your creative words are breathtaking in this wonderful Dodoitsu Russell. Thank you for sharing. Warm Smiles, Connie

Nette Onclaud February 21, 2014 at 2:41 PM an excellent write with excellent descriptive detail, yet leaving just enough for me to complete the depiction and make whole, russell..towering work like a mountain!.. huggs

Shadow Hamilton February 21, 2014 at 1:55 PM I love mountains they are so majestic Russell beautifully portrayed in this exquisite write hugs

Tim B February 21, 2014 at 10:47 AM The majesty of mountains. My friend, you make me miss my home. Though, I tell you, they can feel a bit overwhelming. They are so alluring from a distance, speaking of God's grace and power. Thanks for sharing.

Eileen Manassian February 21, 2014 at 9:49 AM Wow!!!! Beautifully painted with words. Yes...you've captured the grandeur of mountains well....

Chuck Melugin February 21, 2014 at 8:14 AM Dear Russell, the view you penned is breath taking! I am transported and in awe! 7 my best, chuck

Robert Pettit February 20, 2014 at 11:49 PM Very descriptive duo of dodoitsu entries.