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This is a Lune haiku. ~
midsummer's easy dragonflies children free from cares

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/4/2024 12:59:00 PM
Nice combination of characters for the Haiku. I think children and dragonflies work together well. I can imagine how they would look out there together. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by. Sara K
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Regina Elliott
Date: 7/12/2024 2:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara. I hope you Have a splendid July weekend chock full of creative penning. Blessings :)
Date: 7/3/2024 3:36:00 AM
may our children fly free in a good way... marvelous ' ku, gina!
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Regina Elliott
Date: 7/4/2024 4:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nette! Many blessings to you :)
Date: 7/3/2024 1:24:00 AM
This haiku is so beautiful and captures the innocence of children.
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Date: 7/4/2024 4:42:00 AM
Your kind words mean a lot to me, thank you so much, Victor. Have a grand summer day.
Date: 7/2/2024 4:17:00 PM
Such a charmed life for children. All I know is that dragonflies and deer-flies scare the bejeebers out of me these days! lol. :) gw
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Date: 7/4/2024 4:45:00 AM
Praying mantis freaked me out as a child, lol! Thank you so much, Gershon, for stopping by to read my summer Lune haiku. Shalom :)
Date: 7/2/2024 1:43:00 PM
if only life was like this for all children .. and adults too for that matter! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2024 4:47:00 AM
Hi Jan, if only war wasn't affecting so many children now. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my summer Lune haiku. Have a lovely summer day. xx
Date: 7/2/2024 12:34:00 PM
Lovely imagery Regina... and all children should feel free..
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Date: 7/2/2024 1:27:00 PM
Yes, dear Silent One, children should feel free from the ills of mankind, nowadays especially from war. Thank you so much for coming by. Have a splendid summer evening
Date: 7/2/2024 12:09:00 PM
Regina…you are a master at combining natural elements with humanity. In a very original and unique poetic fashion. ^^^^^A Fav ^^^^^ Pangie
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Date: 7/2/2024 1:24:00 PM
My deepest gratitude, dear Pangie, for the FAV and the lovely comment. Keep cool in your home. Many blessings :)

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