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Midnight Typhoon

Spring tide pounding against a rocky relationship between the new moon and earth’s pie in the sky. On an island of one’s own making in the mind — like a whirlpool when imagination slips away on a one-way ticket to disaster — no peace to find. Stonewalling rest with stress and anxiety. No sleep on a tidal bore without soporifics in a midnight typhoon pawning fantasy. by Berteena Harmony of the Soul February 3, 2019

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/13/2020 4:36:00 AM

L O V E L Y words, my friend. Inspiring to the end. Love and prayers for you

Peter Dome

Date: 12/5/2020 2:03:00 PM

wonderful emotional write. I felt this one. well done.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/19/2020 1:26:00 AM

No sleep on a tidal bore without soporifics in a midnight typhoon pawning fantasy....sometimes I feel like this; beautiful sharing

John Watt

Date: 7/31/2020 6:28:00 PM

I wasn't active on Soup when this was posted, but I'm enjoying it now. Great writing and congratulations on being honored with POTW. A very deserving poem ~ John

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/6/2019 8:40:00 PM

Hello Berteena Harmony Of The Soul, so nice to meet you.I also want to congratulations on POTW. I also enjoyed your poem. have a nice evening my friend.

P.M. Richter

Date: 2/14/2019 12:03:00 PM

Congratulations on POTW! Great poem Berteena :)

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/14/2019 10:57:00 PM

I’m so happy. Thanks so much! ;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/13/2019 3:47:00 PM

Wonderful, captivating piece! Congrats on POTW! xomo :)

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/13/2019 9:50:00 PM

It's an honor! Thank you for your lovely words. ;)

Constance La France

Date: 2/12/2019 11:05:00 PM

Berteena, congratulations on having your poem selected as POTW, enjoy the honor ~

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/12/2019 11:49:00 PM

Thank you so much! I feel so blessed! <3

Marilyn Williams

Date: 2/11/2019 12:07:00 PM

Eloquently put. Loved your verses. Congrats on your POTW!

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/12/2019 6:17:00 PM

Very kind of you! Thank you! ;)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/10/2019 11:51:00 AM

Hi Berteena, dropping by with congratulations on your Poem Of the Week with this wonderful write. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/10/2019 4:49:00 PM

Wow! Thanks so much, Vladislav. I just discovered that it was poem of the week. So happy! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/7/2019 8:20:00 AM

Very creative and certainly stirs the mind, the imagination and the heart to ponder life and its mysteries, complexities and spins and turns! Truly enjoyed this creation.. A clear fav for me..

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/8/2019 12:05:00 AM

Oh wow! You are so gracious and kind, dear one. My spirit is humble. Gratitude!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/4/2019 7:57:00 AM

So much turmoil you brilliantly painted in your words...an excellent write, Berteena. Ending superbly written.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/4/2019 9:05:00 AM

Vijay, you flatter me with such lovely words. I am so pleased that this poem has been received well. Thank you so much, dear one.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/4/2019 7:27:00 AM

Nicely written, Berteena, lots of turmoil and chaos going on in this poem. Sometimes life feels this way and we always make it out to be much worse in our minds than it really is. All the best my friend. John

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/4/2019 9:02:00 AM

You know, I wrote most of this one night around 03:00 am when I couldn’t sleep. I jotted notes down on my phone notepad. I was aggravated because I work nights & often do not get home until 02:00-03:00. I had a chance to get some real sleep. As I lie there, I thought about all the other people who have the same kind of thoughts replaying like a movie because of stress/worry in their lives. My husband snoring next to me sparked my imagination for the noise. I just took the idea from there the next day while it was still fresh. I really didn’t know if people could relate or get the feel of this poem. I wanted it to be received w/more than one meaning so that whoever read it could empathize. When we use our imagination, poetry can mean whatever we read into it. I really appreciate your support, my friend. Thank you for encouraging me, John.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/4/2019 3:51:00 AM

This is exciting! Such an original, compact and flowing style -- I love this!

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/4/2019 8:51:00 AM

Wow! Thanks so much!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/3/2019 8:16:00 PM

Berteena, this poem is gorgeously written. Your metaphors are terrific. Well done indeed. Amazing.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/3/2019 9:17:00 PM

Thank you for blessing me. I appreciate you!