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Midnight Storm

Ships aground all around rolling, roiling waters of midnight’s sudden surprise storm. Willful winds usurp and fling sea vessels hither and yon uncaring ruthless rush.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/1/2021 12:50:00 PM

Wonderful!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/1/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Kim. :) Linda

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2021 8:21:00 PM

Linda, I like the way you used alliteration and onomatopoeia to produce a dramatic, stormy effect. ~ Rising Tides, Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/31/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your attention to my words. :) Linda

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/29/2021 7:26:00 AM

Reminded me of when I was on a ship heading back to Miami, it bounced along with strong winds blowing. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/29/2021 8:28:00 AM

Hi Tom. I'm glad you weren't in a 'perfect' storm. :) Thanks for the visit and comment! Linda

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/28/2021 11:06:00 PM

Quite descriptive. I like the form you used. ~~

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/29/2021 6:27:00 AM

Hello Victor! Many thanks for the visit and kind words. :) Linda