MIDNIGHT SPELL

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Let your eyes do the talking when you have lost your tongue Let the blue of your eyes spin long tales beneath stars Let midnight silence turn to honey under the charm of your spell Let the moon thru the branches bear witness while stir summer breezes AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on September 18, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/19/2021 9:29:00 AM

Midnight magic...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/19/2021 5:38:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Delice ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/19/2021 1:11:00 AM

Very romantic verse Line, love the imagery of the moonlight sending its rays through the branches. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/19/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thank you very much, Tom. I think it's healthy to change the tone of my poetry ~

Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/18/2021 9:52:00 PM

Your poem is dreamy, I see lovely images as I read it. The word celestial comes to mind. I liked your last two lines the best, because ironically around 7:00 tonight, there was a beautiful moon over the water where I live. The sky was melting pink into blue, it was still "warm and breezy" I'm pleased to have found your peaceful piece.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2021 10:15:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Marikate ~