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Midnight Romance

MIDNIGHT ROMANCE The artist captures porcelain features. Distinct - her eyebrows drawn with charcoal arch. More beautiful then all of God’s creatures. A cerulean splay o’er wedding march. Refined ash of roses speckles irises. Her crimson hair, on fire - the nose smells smoke. The obsidian sky lured with french kiss. Ivory skin lights up love’s leaning oak. Adrift with life, she sparkles in white gown. The artist touched by sweet hands of glory - An introvert, she drew his smile from frown. A writer, henceforth, she writes his story. Absinthe quickens the sable eyes of groom, As moonlight drifts inside the artist’s room. 10/31/2017 Moonlight Sonnet Contest Sponsored by Dale Cozart 14 lines/Iambic Pentameter was optional Syllables per line 10/checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 11/18/2017 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 11/11/2017 10:46:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive write, Kim, and very worthy of the win - congrats my friend! :-) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Greg! <3
Date: 11/9/2017 5:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Date: 11/7/2017 12:52:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Kim. congratulations on your win. Elaine
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Elaine! xx
Date: 11/6/2017 7:46:00 PM
Well done Kim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Date: 11/6/2017 4:05:00 PM
a very beautiful sonnet Kim congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :)
Date: 11/6/2017 3:50:00 PM
Beautifully written using the required words, Kim. Congratulations for your placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Sandra! :)
Date: 11/6/2017 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on your win! So well deserved. I love how you've built the required words into this sonnet. Best, Judy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Judy!
Date: 11/6/2017 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your 9th Place win! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Dale! :)
Date: 10/31/2017 8:11:00 AM
Well penned....I was carried away. Beautiful I would say. I love your use of words too. A very winning poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sherifat!
Date: 10/31/2017 7:56:00 AM
So well written--a winning poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay! I appreciate so!!

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