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Midnight Ride

I took a midnight ride, the heat witout fans, humidity so high Relief of cool air blowing in windows , then a surprise in the sky I saw the biggest orange 3/4 moon, that i ever saw before I can't believe i found this gift, you can't buy it in a store ! Heidi Sands 7/20/22

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Joseph May

Date: 7/21/2022 7:12:00 AM

A beautiful orange moon surprise..

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/21/2022 11:37:00 AM

Yes. It was such a surprise. Thank you Joseph :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/20/2022 4:39:00 PM

Heidi, you did a wonderful job portraying the serene ambiance in your poem. A lovely moon to accompany a lovely piece of writing. I adore looking up at the starry sky.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2022 5:59:00 PM

Thank you very much Sotto :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/20/2022 9:48:00 AM

A beautiful moon for a beautiful write. I love the night sky. So true, one cannot buy this. Have a a fun/blessed day..........................

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2022 12:13:00 PM

It was beautiful and unbelievable. Large and orange in the sky. Thank you Paula! Blessings :)