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MIDNIGHT HOUR

Into my dreary days Rode hope on scented lines In this pool of darkest deep So bleak.. only love could find A world of suffocating stench Pulls me closer to the abyss I close my eyes in surrender Instead of death I feel a kiss A simple note scribbled out Words that touched my soul Is it enough to quench doubt How will the story now unfold Does she see behind the muse Is there a way in this black night A narrow path.. could I escape Is this girl my guiding light Cause when she says my name It’s as if... she is here All these ominous storm clouds She breathes out they disappear Oh, there’s magic in her words In her whisper there’s great power Girl.. reach out and take my hand Pull me from this midnight hour If her sweet letter is a dream Then I pray to never awake If she’s not heaven’s angel I’m falling hard for a mistake I’m taken in by all her prose God, I so want to believe Release me from these chains If this is the moment.. I receive Cause when she says my name It’s as if... she is here All these ominous storm clouds She breathes out they disappear Oh, there’s magic in her words In her whisper there’s great power Girl.. reach out and take my hand Pull me from this midnight hour I believe.. Is that her touch What a rush.. I receive Cause when she says my name It’s as if... she is here All these ominous storm clouds She breathes out they disappear Oh, there’s magic in her words In her whisper there’s great power Girl.. reach out and take my hand Pull me from this midnight hour ~Lyric Man Note: Sometimes a perfectly timed note, even in an email, can bring you salvation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/31/2018 1:45:00 PM
What a beautiful delivery, Dave! At times, just one word or a smile can work wonders! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 10/26/2018 2:10:00 AM
Excellent job
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Date: 10/6/2018 7:50:00 PM
magic reveal if in love.... Beautiful Lyric Man..
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:59:00 AM
Gotta fav this exquisite beauty. Tho' speaking of sad this gem also shows the bright light of love and promise of bliss that "she brings" to a weary soul! Such is truth and is presented in truly brilliant and very captivating poetic form my most talented friend..
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Date: 10/1/2018 8:25:00 PM
It sounds like she could feel you, your heart- that tender ache inside. It isn't a dream, she is real. Her words hold hope, peace, happiness and love. It is wonderful that your heart is lifted, you should always soar in the sweet touch of the sky. In that Midnight Hour, she will take your hand and lift you even more. I know she will. I believe. Your thoughts wrap softly around me. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/1/2018 7:04:00 PM
Wow!! Lyric Man, absolutely splendid.. Your lyrics are so smooth!! Your talent always shines.. Blessings, my friend..
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Date: 10/1/2018 4:36:00 PM
Lm As you wrap your pen in Midnight, It pours emotion to the nines! You are an artist ESQ!
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:28:00 PM
Very romantic, heartfelt lyric, LM. Enjoyed reading your poem..excellent rhythm and flow.
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:20:00 PM
we sometimes have to connect through handwritten notes or mail for some human reciprocity... written with such lyrical flow and certain melancholia... love it, D... glad you're back!..huggs
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:50:00 AM
Well written and so true. Wishing you well :)
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:37:00 AM
only the lonely, a poem to wake one up to the sadness of the many, them that need a friend, i know been there done that,wish your poetry had been around then,,,
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:25:00 AM
It only takes one word LM, fab lyrics my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:16:00 AM
How true Dave, even one word is enough to bring you back from the edge sometimes. Lovely lyric. Tom
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