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Midnight Closet Magic-Senryu

Shoes dance at night. In my closet, what a sight. Beauties, in starlight.                3/5/2031            ~ 3~      Rhymed Senryu

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Date: 3/6/2021 10:52:00 PM
Very mystical these shoes dancing around your closet; a colorful poem.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/7/2021 4:53:00 PM
LOl.ML)) they are a colorful group, and come in print...Metallic colors, etc. Looks like Carnival in Rio.... PS..every time I have an excuse not to write a poem I think of you and what you told me. In my mind there is no excuse not to write...any nor missing Muse!))... Just write. Try new forms..stop using the same old forms. And lastly, so what if few comments? That keeps me on a roll!! Hugs, Pangie
Date: 3/6/2021 4:47:00 AM
I love A Ballerina's Eternal Dream. The transformation never ends. It continues on in your present ardent life. You continue to inspire others in ways you perhaps, never dreamed.
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Date: 3/6/2021 8:39:00 AM
Glad you liked it, Madelyn... I have a poem on belly dancing, too. Which was great fun! A very sweet thing to say, that I inspire others. I wish! "Transformation never ends". ~ reminds me OS a mentor in San Francisco! Merci, Panagiota
Date: 3/6/2021 2:00:00 AM
I bet it brought back many happy memories of your dancing years. Tom
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Date: 3/6/2021 8:34:00 AM
Each day, I remember dancing years..))) What fun...I started ballet at age seven, I think. But love ballroom and any international dances, too. Like the Greek circle dances. Fun! Pangie. Thank you.
Date: 3/5/2021 2:38:00 PM
This is a really cool image here. Almost like a fairy tale. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/5/2021 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Judy, ...thank you for visiting my poem's today. Like good ballerinas from Swan Lake, they bow to you. )) Panagiota xx
Date: 3/5/2021 12:12:00 PM
Could there be a pair of well trained purple toe shoes?
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Date: 3/5/2021 1:59:00 PM
Madelyn, read my Poem...a ballerina's sweet dream Https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/a_ballerinas_eternal_dream_1305137 You must be psychic, perhaps.LOL Panagiota xx
Date: 3/5/2021 12:02:00 PM
A very creative senryu, Pangie! Your feet filled those dancing shoes in earlier times and you trained them well - ha! Bob H
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Date: 3/5/2021 1:46:00 PM
Hi Bob! You got that sooo right. I was a non-stop dancer! Now my shoes dance in my place!LoL Thank you Pangie.
Date: 3/5/2021 10:48:00 AM
- It's magic ... I hope they dance quietly :) - Happy weekend, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2021 1:42:00 PM
LOL Anne-Lise.)) so far, they mind their manners. Weekend will be great..it's like Spring here. My backyard is hosting such lovely cats.my indoor cat, Irene, loves their antics. She's nearly stuck to the window from observations! LOL! Panagiota xx

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