Mickey and Minnie

In a bunker having his way
When a golf ball took his breath away
Got struck on the head
Minnie groaned and said
Mick is this what they call fore play



Penned April 5 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/16/2013 4:50:00 PM
Congrats, Seren. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/16/2013 6:06:00 PM
Hi Ralph how are you? Thanks for stopping by...Seren
Date: 4/12/2013 7:10:00 PM
Very cute.....congratulations Seren ....Donna
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Date: 4/13/2013 2:49:00 PM
Thx Donna ..Seren
Date: 4/11/2013 11:01:00 AM
Seren, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:45:00 PM
Thanks PD ...Seren
Date: 4/9/2013 8:16:00 PM
Hi and congratulations Sass, made me laugh lol xx
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:19:00 PM
good , Mandy, you ok....Seren
Date: 4/9/2013 6:38:00 PM
Good Limerick! Congratulations on the fine win!
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 PM
Hi roy, thanks my friend...Seren
Date: 4/9/2013 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 PM
thank you Abdulhafee...Seren
Date: 4/9/2013 2:38:00 PM
good one Seren, many congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 4/9/2013 3:10:00 PM
thank you Francine.. Seren
Date: 4/5/2013 8:57:00 PM
he he he.love this one Seren, is it for the couples contest... if so good luck....linda
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Date: 4/5/2013 11:50:00 PM
Glad it raised a chuckle. Nah it was for the golf one but i mssed the entry. Never mind.....Seren
Date: 4/5/2013 6:42:00 PM
I'm speechless to the extent I'm in serious chortle mode. Somewhere below the canopy of Poets, there has to be CCTV if purely to witness Seren in mega laughing mode in the thinking of this write. What do I say <> this is the format of the 'Limerick' to test the wit of the reader and writer. Top marks girl, cheery :) have a good weekend :)
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Date: 4/5/2013 6:58:00 PM
lol James, yes I was laughing, am i so obvious.glad it made you chortle, actually was in the shower when i thought it up, so no cameras allowed. hahaha...Seren
Date: 4/5/2013 12:59:00 PM
Seren well done just as a limerick should be, good luck...David
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Date: 4/5/2013 2:03:00 PM
LOL it made me smile when I wrote it, its not in a contest David i missed the gate. Never mind, still decided to post it here...Seren
Date: 4/5/2013 5:34:00 AM
That was funny I read some real good ones this morning. Have a great day!
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Date: 4/5/2013 5:57:00 AM
thanks but I was too late for the contest boo hoo. ...Seren
Date: 4/5/2013 5:31:00 AM
Ha ha, oh, that's funny Seren! This is quite the twist within your write, "fore play" ha ha! You really tickled my funny bone with this amazing poem my friend! What an outstanding piece, quite the hilarious write, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/5/2013 5:58:00 AM
thought I was being clever on the word "fore" but am too late for contest never mind...Seren
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