Mickey and Minnie

In a bunker having his way
When a golf ball took his breath away
Got struck on the head
Minnie groaned and said
Mick is this what they call fore play



Penned April 5 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Taylor Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 4:50 PM
Congrats, Seren. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Roberts Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Hi Ralph how are you? Thanks for stopping by...Seren
Jones Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Very cute.....congratulations Seren ....Donna
Roberts Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Thx Donna ..Seren
A   Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Seren, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD
Roberts Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 12:45 PM
Thanks PD ...Seren
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April 9, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Hi and congratulations Sass, made me laugh lol xx
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:19 PM
good , Mandy, you ok....Seren
Jerden Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Good Limerick! Congratulations on the fine win!
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Hi roy, thanks my friend...Seren
Oyewole Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on your win
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:18 PM
thank you Abdulhafee...Seren
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 2:38 PM
good one Seren, many congrats on your win in the contest
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 3:10 PM
thank you Francine.. Seren
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April 5, 2013 at 8:57 PM
he he he.love this one Seren, is it for the couples contest... if so good luck....linda
Roberts Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 11:50 PM
Glad it raised a chuckle. Nah it was for the golf one but i mssed the entry. Never mind.....Seren
Fraser Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:42 PM
I'm speechless to the extent I'm in serious chortle mode. Somewhere below the canopy of Poets, there has to be CCTV if purely to witness Seren in mega laughing mode in the thinking of this write. What do I say <> this is the format of the 'Limerick' to test the wit of the reader and writer. Top marks girl, cheery :) have a good weekend :)
Roberts Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 6:58 PM
lol James, yes I was laughing, am i so obvious.glad it made you chortle, actually was in the shower when i thought it up, so no cameras allowed. hahaha...Seren
Williams Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Seren well done just as a limerick should be, good luck...David
Roberts Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 2:03 PM
LOL it made me smile when I wrote it, its not in a contest David i missed the gate. Never mind, still decided to post it here...Seren
Heemstra Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 5:34 AM
That was funny I read some real good ones this morning. Have a great day!
Roberts Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 5:57 AM
thanks but I was too late for the contest boo hoo. ...Seren
Sivey Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 5:31 AM
Ha ha, oh, that's funny Seren! This is quite the twist within your write, "fore play" ha ha! You really tickled my funny bone with this amazing poem my friend! What an outstanding piece, quite the hilarious write, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 5:58 AM
thought I was being clever on the word "fore" but am too late for contest never mind...Seren
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