Michael's Final Olympics

The Louvre debuted an exhibit today:
Cascading Marbles of Ripples and Folds.
In waves came patrons in trenches to see
what secrets David, the masterpiece, holds;

Each stroke of genius from Michelangelo,
memories written by one fountain pen.
The stories of glory reflected in mirrors,
standing on mantels as sculptures - not men;

Below, the crests are eagerly waiting
to swim with artists whose tributes remind:
Of time, friends, and even love sacrificed,
with hopes that they may be honored in kind.

Immortal cocoons that blossomed to gold,
butterflies all, confident, hold steady,
their backs are pressed with spotlighted silver,
adrenaline flowing now as they ready:
Greek gods embossed with streamed streaks of bronze,
on cliffs of Olympus, peer at the sea;	

Then, from the silence, a shrill piercing scream –
     Michael Phelps gives chase to one final dream.


8/10/2016
Submitted for Contest:  Olympic Mania
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Lively lines just like the athletes! :D Congrats Sunita.
Neumann Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 4:34 AM
This is a great take on Michael Phelps and the Olympics. He won, won many hearts and won the battle over his addiction. Many wishes, Kai
Haight Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Love how you contrast this famed Olympic athlete with man-made gods of the world, Phillip. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short winner's list. Sandra
Johnson Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poetry. Love, Joyce
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Very nice! Congratulations!
Scars Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Phillip, wonderful poem and such great description...Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Very different but exciting poetry. Liked it a lot. Congratulations and thanks for being in my contest.
Garcia Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:05 PM
thank you Janis! it was a fun contest and obviously well timed
Godwin Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Well done - I could feel the excitement ... CayCay
Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:29 AM
A wonderful write:) A #7 for this lovely poem dedicated to Michael Phelps:)
Garcia Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Thank you again. I'm still vexed by the 3 way tie for silver he won yesterday. It feels very little league to me. It's been a fun 16 year or however long ride with him either way
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Impressive - excellent poem, Phillip ... CayCay
Garcia Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Thank you Ms Jennings!
Y. Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:09 AM
Hi Phillip, You have penned a good Quatrain. Twenty -0ne and counting. He's going to go out with a bang. Great job. I wish you the best in the contest-7:-) Alexis
Garcia Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Muchas gracias my friend. I can't believe how old he's gotten. Makes me feel all the older.
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