Michael's Final Olympics

The Louvre debuted an exhibit today:
Cascading Marbles of Ripples and Folds.
In waves came patrons in trenches to see
what secrets David, the masterpiece, holds;

Each stroke of genius from Michelangelo,
memories written by one fountain pen.
The stories of glory reflected in mirrors,
standing on mantels as sculptures - not men;

Below, the crests are eagerly waiting
to swim with artists whose tributes remind:
Of time, friends, and even love sacrificed,
with hopes that they may be honored in kind.

Immortal cocoons that blossomed to gold,
butterflies all, confident, hold steady,
their backs are pressed with spotlighted silver,
adrenaline flowing now as they ready:
Greek gods embossed with streamed streaks of bronze,
on cliffs of Olympus, peer at the sea;	

Then, from the silence, a shrill piercing scream –
     Michael Phelps gives chase to one final dream.


8/10/2016
Submitted for Contest:  Olympic Mania

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/6/2016 12:55:00 PM
Lively lines just like the athletes! :D Congrats Sunita.
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Date: 9/6/2016 4:34:00 AM
This is a great take on Michael Phelps and the Olympics. He won, won many hearts and won the battle over his addiction. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/5/2016 1:09:00 PM
Love how you contrast this famed Olympic athlete with man-made gods of the world, Phillip. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short winner's list. Sandra
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Date: 9/4/2016 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/4/2016 9:40:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/4/2016 9:09:00 PM
Phillip, wonderful poem and such great description...Congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/4/2016 8:59:00 PM
Very different but exciting poetry. Liked it a lot. Congratulations and thanks for being in my contest.
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 9/4/2016 9:05:00 PM
thank you Janis! it was a fun contest and obviously well timed
Date: 9/1/2016 10:47:00 PM
Well done - I could feel the excitement ... CayCay
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Date: 8/13/2016 7:29:00 AM
A wonderful write:) A #7 for this lovely poem dedicated to Michael Phelps:)
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/13/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you again. I'm still vexed by the 3 way tie for silver he won yesterday. It feels very little league to me. It's been a fun 16 year or however long ride with him either way
Date: 8/11/2016 1:04:00 AM
Impressive - excellent poem, Phillip ... CayCay
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/11/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Ms Jennings!
Date: 8/11/2016 12:09:00 AM
Hi Phillip, You have penned a good Quatrain. Twenty -0ne and counting. He's going to go out with a bang. Great job. I wish you the best in the contest-7:-) Alexis
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/11/2016 12:11:00 AM
Muchas gracias my friend. I can't believe how old he's gotten. Makes me feel all the older.
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