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Mice People

you got no squattin rights here you know what happens this time of the year it gets bone cold at least starts in your fingers and toes should've moved on earlier gotten a head start but can't seem to keep in mind the grasshopper and the ant nothin to do now you're in the house except set out tiny tables of peanut butter for you and yours instead of extention cords

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Date: 10/15/2019 9:18:00 AM
I would definitely take mice over rats. ;p Great poem my friend! xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2019 9:57:00 AM
Lol. About that, stumbled upon tinnitus cure on line, turned out to be a sound recording. Felt like a brain cleaning, angling it at different spots in my brain, like scratching itches. Alas, didn't work. New pitch like a jet engine, kitchen aid motor...not that loud, but the pitch.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/15/2019 9:23:00 AM
Mice for sure. Thanks Maureen, but I was serious about your line "smacked so hard I can hear stars"!!!!! You should write a poem about the 1977 "WOW signal".

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