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Miami Weather

That Miami weather is something else, almost like life itself, raw and uncontrollable. Sometimes its raining in front of you and other times its raining behind. Occasionally it only rains on your house at least thats what it seems like. The meteorologist says that its a slight chance of thunderstorms but how can one ever predict these sunny skies with a veil of dreadful clouds full of percipitation trailing in the distance along the horizon; That you can barely see because the sun is bright so you have to use your hands as a shade for your eyes and a fan for your face and neck and chest. I mean it really gets hot down here, and it storms and somtimes its freezing. Similar to life because at times things are peaceful and other times life is so tumultuous and filled with violent winds, and massive bolts of electricty and Gods baritone voice echoing miles away yet clear as ever. Cold gray days when everything seems unclear and there is no warmth near and just when you think you're done, your blessed with a burst of sun, or a cool gentle breeze whatever it is that you need to continue where you left off. Funny thing, that Miami Weather, funny thing indeed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 7:19:00 PM
Very nice. Glad you are posting. Keep up the good stuff. glo
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Date: 11/18/2011 5:45:00 PM
I remember we used to race the rain on our way from school. Lovely write; makes me think of the days growing up in Jamaica.
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:23:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Montrice. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:56:00 AM
:) Fresh writing! Good job!!
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